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a Rondeau - see notes.
Luna's Form Poetry
: Tooth Fairy by Luna
To Mickey, with love.

Tonight, young girl lost a tooth, but it found
safety under her pillow; now it's bound
for a new home 'neath trees of sweet cherry.
Listen...distress call came for Tooth Fairy,
who "quick-as-a-wink" summoned Flying Hound.

Quiet! Her silvery wings made no sound
as she picked up the tooth ~ looked far around ~
traded in for a fiddle of cherry.
          ~~ Tonight, young girl's spellbound.

Flying Hound saw her home.  Breezing through town 
at top speed; she took stock ~  instantly found
summer months would wear down our Tooth Fairy.
That season is when mothers are wary...
children take chances down at the fairground.
           ~~ Tonight, young girl's spellbound.

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Author Notes
A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain and a sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows:

aabba, aabR, aabbaR

Lines 9 and 15 are short, a refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one.
The other lines are longer.

     

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