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Going Out Of My Head. by rhonnie69
Feelings Poetry writing prompt entry
Artwork by Raoul D'Harmental at FanArtReview.com

Mixed emotions, different notions.
Deeper than the seas and all of the oceans.

DEEP SO DEEP.

Losing and winning, my head is spinning.
Sometimes I'm grinning, other times I just weep.

Baby. Baby. Baby. I can't understand you.
One day you're here, the next day you're there.

THE NEXT DAY YOU'RE NOWHERE.

Mixed emotions, I can't understand it.
Different notions, we never planed it.

You'd better change your ways.
I'm searching for better days.

I thought you were my girl,
you were as sweet as you could be.

I thought I had s good woman.

Until one day you came to me
talking bye, bye baby.

I never saw it coming.

How could you have the nerve,
to tread upon my heart?

OH NO! BABY DON'T GO!
You said..."we two will never part."

You said..."as long as the rivers flow,
You said, "I will never ever go."

So where are you now?
You said..."You'll never know."

Mixed emotions, I can't conceive you.
different notions. I can't believe you.

You'd better change your ways...

"I'M SEARCHING FOR BETTER DAYS."


Writing Prompt
Emotions have overcome us all at one time or another. It could be from someone that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Write a poem that expresses feelings and emotions such as anger or depression. Any type of poem is welcomed.

Author Notes
Leave her alone. And she will come home. Wagging her tail behind her.

     

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