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One Thousand Cranes
: After The Cool Rain by Gypsy Blue Rose
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after the cool rain,

wet earth's sweet aroma swells —

bluebell bends to smell

 


 


Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 that has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
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Author Notes
wet earth smell is called petrichor

HAIKU

Definition: haiku is a short poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of an experience of nature intuitively linked to the human condition.

The essence of haiku is cutting (KIRU) represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas separated by a (KIREJI) dash or ellipsis (~ ... )

KIGO (seasonal reference), usually drawn from a (SAIJIKI) an extensive list of season terms. if you wish to read a saijiki

     

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