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The Hair Clip by Gypsy Blue Rose
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after funeral,

I lie in our frigid bed —

your hair clip jabs me

 



Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.
Senryu Poetry
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Author Notes
Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, or less. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.

     

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