Be A Friend
Show them you care.7 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Congrats on your shared win for this contest entry!
If the image is your family, terrific photo! Otherwise, you paired it perfectly with your poem.
Your rhymes are spot on and not forced - good overall presentation.
Mark
P.S. IMHO I would have used a black font instead of your brownish one.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Congrats on your shared win for this contest entry!
If the image is your family, terrific photo! Otherwise, you paired it perfectly with your poem.
Your rhymes are spot on and not forced - good overall presentation.
Mark
P.S. IMHO I would have used a black font instead of your brownish one.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
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It was a photo of two best friends.
Comment from LisaMay
You have written a nice poem, emphasising the value of loving friendship in a rhyming verse. Affection, good humour, and empathy are wonderful attributes.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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You have written a nice poem, emphasising the value of loving friendship in a rhyming verse. Affection, good humour, and empathy are wonderful attributes.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Eunice Amero
What a nice poem. Like your picture. There is nothing like a kind heart and someone to love you. Appreciation flows your heart and it seems you never forget them. You did a good job. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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What a nice poem. Like your picture. There is nothing like a kind heart and someone to love you. Appreciation flows your heart and it seems you never forget them. You did a good job. Hope you win.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
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You are so welcome
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Check out my story please.
Comment from F. William Lester
Very well done and so true. Friends and loved ones are so important in our lives. We need each other today more than ever. You had all the necessary elements. Loved your piece. Thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest and stay well.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Very well done and so true. Friends and loved ones are so important in our lives. We need each other today more than ever. You had all the necessary elements. Loved your piece. Thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest and stay well.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
Thank you.
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You're welcome.
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Check out my story please.
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I'm not sure what it is you want me to check out.
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My greatest fear story.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I find it difficult for me, and I suspect anyone to make hay from short poems, but I find this piece of your spot on and congratulate you for the entry to this contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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I find it difficult for me, and I suspect anyone to make hay from short poems, but I find this piece of your spot on and congratulate you for the entry to this contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from jessizero
Your poem was sweet with just 17 syllables. I am impressed that you managed to rhyme it with that restriction. It is good advice, as well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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Your poem was sweet with just 17 syllables. I am impressed that you managed to rhyme it with that restriction. It is good advice, as well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
For sure. Holding on to the ones that you love show them you care. The picture is beautiful and goes hand in hand with the poem. Erase those tears. Thank you for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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For sure. Holding on to the ones that you love show them you care. The picture is beautiful and goes hand in hand with the poem. Erase those tears. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2022
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You are welcome.
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Have a great day and stay safe.
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You too.