Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was wonderful. I love how you shared the details of their Valentine's date with non other than Michael Jackson. The scene is charming and romantic. Makes me think this is the beginning of a promising romance between them. The attention to detail and heartfelt interactions between LaKara and Michael had me rooting for their happiness as they share their Valentine's Day together.

 Comment Written 17-May-2024

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reply by the author on 17-May-2024

Thank you Michael. I?m glad that you enjoyed it. The Valentine?s Day party is the longest part I have. So I have more of it coming. I hope you don?t get bored. It?s just about to get Hot! I have to post it a little at a time. Thank you for reading. Stay tuned.

Comment from marthag1

Excellent

Your storytelling beautifully captures the excitement and nerves of a budding romance. The attention to detail in describing LaKara's preparations and Michael's thoughtful gift adds depth to their characters. Readers can't help but feel the warmth and anticipation as they embark on their Valentine's Day adventure together.

 Comment Written 13-May-2024

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reply by the author on 14-May-2024

Thank you so much Marthag1. That?s exactly what I was trying to do. I?ve got a long way to go with this part alone, but please stay tuned. I hope it does not get boring to you. Thank you for your kind words.