Creative work-a struggle and joy.
How to become good at most things-like art.39 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
Hi Robina - correct format and syllable count and a pretty good message. After trying so hard to improve my writing skills, very believeable. Good luck in your contest. I entered as well, so hope you get second place! Bill
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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Hi Robina - correct format and syllable count and a pretty good message. After trying so hard to improve my writing skills, very believeable. Good luck in your contest. I entered as well, so hope you get second place! Bill
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your kind review and be assured I don't expect a place-just a new member4.Hope you do well.
Comment from minik4666
it is a small poem but has a lot of meaning behind it andis tellling the audience that they have to work hard to get a great mind and is very encouraging and motivating poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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it is a small poem but has a lot of meaning behind it andis tellling the audience that they have to work hard to get a great mind and is very encouraging and motivating poem.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your generous review
Comment from amaobong
This poem is well structured not disjointed,it pictures in so little words how to develop creative minds. The words are simple and direct and the rhymes are not forced.
Would have wished that the poem had another stanza telling us more about the hard work needed in the building of creative minds.
Beautiful,direct naani poetry, great job.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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This poem is well structured not disjointed,it pictures in so little words how to develop creative minds. The words are simple and direct and the rhymes are not forced.
Would have wished that the poem had another stanza telling us more about the hard work needed in the building of creative minds.
Beautiful,direct naani poetry, great job.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your review.Might dwell on a longer one some time maybe.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes crativity is a gift. Sometimes things come easily and sometimes not. It usually helps your state of mind when you enjoy what you've created.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Yes crativity is a gift. Sometimes things come easily and sometimes not. It usually helps your state of mind when you enjoy what you've created.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your kind review dragon.
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from linsbm
A very well written naani poetry. Yes, that's true, creative minds are not inborn, yet it can be learned through deligence and to know is to try. I enjoyed how you used the language, it's witty and punchy.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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A very well written naani poetry. Yes, that's true, creative minds are not inborn, yet it can be learned through deligence and to know is to try. I enjoyed how you used the language, it's witty and punchy.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Thanks very much for your kind review
Comment from Aislinge
Nicely done. The piece reads well, with a smooth meter. Love the message here, and I agree, it is hard work. I envy those that have more natural talent than I :-)
Thank you for a great read.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Nicely done. The piece reads well, with a smooth meter. Love the message here, and I agree, it is hard work. I envy those that have more natural talent than I :-)
Thank you for a great read.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for your review and I share your envy
Comment from SOFAJOHN
Those simple short lines say it all. No "beat about the bush," but a straightforward approach to passing across its crystal-clear message to the reader. It's one fascinating poem. The choice of artwork further enhance its appeal. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Those simple short lines say it all. No "beat about the bush," but a straightforward approach to passing across its crystal-clear message to the reader. It's one fascinating poem. The choice of artwork further enhance its appeal. Excellent job.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Stephen Adinoyi
a good poem, but i think at times, one is born with a gift. yes - naturally gifted. there is no one with no talent but many do not know they have
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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a good poem, but i think at times, one is born with a gift. yes - naturally gifted. there is no one with no talent but many do not know they have
Comment Written 27-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Thanks for yr review and suppose you are right.
Comment from triciaw
Thank you for sharing this thought, it was beautifully crafted, when you have not many words each one counts.
It has made me think differently about what are talents and what has to be strived for.
T.W
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Thank you for sharing this thought, it was beautifully crafted, when you have not many words each one counts.
It has made me think differently about what are talents and what has to be strived for.
T.W
Comment Written 27-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review.
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-your Naani has good syllable count-you write the truth-creative minds are a gift which we don't realize--great job.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2011
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Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-your Naani has good syllable count-you write the truth-creative minds are a gift which we don't realize--great job.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2011
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Many thanks again