To The Unknown God
A prayer to the Father6 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I enjoyed this entry for the Faith Poetry Contest writing prompt. There is truth in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
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I enjoyed this entry for the Faith Poetry Contest writing prompt. There is truth in your words. I hope this poem does well in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful presentation of truth in faithful testimony... I did find it a bit difficult to follow in parts: perhaps, a bit more commas or else to guide the reader's thoughts with yours as the use of 'older, more traditional' English can be a bit confounding... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
does faithfully remain. --> do faithfully remain.
image mine --> image my
weathers till the end --> weather till the end
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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A beautiful presentation of truth in faithful testimony... I did find it a bit difficult to follow in parts: perhaps, a bit more commas or else to guide the reader's thoughts with yours as the use of 'older, more traditional' English can be a bit confounding... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
does faithfully remain. --> do faithfully remain.
image mine --> image my
weathers till the end --> weather till the end
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Y.M.Roger,
Thanks for another fine review. Your example and guidance as a poet and reviewer id greatly appreciated.
Eugene
Comment from zanya
These stanzas inspired by the whole idea of Faith take time to reflect and consider the poet's own Faith journey and where it is taking him/her - thanks for sharing
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These stanzas inspired by the whole idea of Faith take time to reflect and consider the poet's own Faith journey and where it is taking him/her - thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very beautiful piece of writing. Clearly states your strong faith. My faith ebbs and wanes like the tides. This shows that sometimes faith is surely put to the test. Fir by your will shall we join together forever as one we shall be. Beautiful ending.
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This is a very beautiful piece of writing. Clearly states your strong faith. My faith ebbs and wanes like the tides. This shows that sometimes faith is surely put to the test. Fir by your will shall we join together forever as one we shall be. Beautiful ending.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
A beautiful faith poem. Your faith shines through every couplet, although you proclaimed to have had your doubts in the beginning. Relax, I guess all of us have experienced this sooner or later. But the faith, the trust in the Lord, the power of His love remains and will triumph in the end, as you showed in the end of your poem.
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A beautiful faith poem. Your faith shines through every couplet, although you proclaimed to have had your doubts in the beginning. Relax, I guess all of us have experienced this sooner or later. But the faith, the trust in the Lord, the power of His love remains and will triumph in the end, as you showed in the end of your poem.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love this. So often poems of faith are stringent in their belief. However, you show your human side. That there can be doubt and how you overcome that. Excellent poem. Well written. Real. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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I love this. So often poems of faith are stringent in their belief. However, you show your human side. That there can be doubt and how you overcome that. Excellent poem. Well written. Real. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Michael,
Thank you for your thoughtful and insightful review. I deeply appreciate and value your uplifting comments.
Cheers,
Eugene