Comment from Adi

Excellent

I loved your poem very very much. The picture of the poem and the picture tell a story. Good luck on your poem and are you born in india because your name sounds like a Indian's name. Any way I am Indian.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Yes,i am an indian.is your name Aditya?people generally shorten it to Adi.nice to meet you.and thanks for the excellent review:-)

reply by Adi on 12-Jul-2013

No it's Vaibhav Mishra but people called me adu and when I came to America it changed to Adi .

Comment from linsbm

Excellent

An excellently written 5-7-5 poem. Good application of alliteration in 'L':

"Lurk lusty leeches
love luminal life-liquor"

A poem that makes one ponder. Good retribution of Red, blood to Vampires. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from simonbagh

Excellent

This is a very thought provoking piece. That makes one more ponder about the being and fate. A very good work, that is written nicely, well done

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from 4tun81

Excellent

Lurk lusty leeches
love luminal life-liquor
rave resurrection

This is a very imaginative 5-7-5 formatted poem. It is not often you see horror in haiku style. Great job! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Vampires are fascinating fictional characters,
I believe. Luminal is a new for me. Does blood
glow?
I like the last line, which seems to make fun
of the whole vampire fad.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

'Luminal' doesn't mean glowing here.
It is a medical term,in general referred to as sedatives.
Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by humpwhistle on 11-Jul-2013

I'm sorry I didn't catch that. All my dictionary references revolved around 'luminosity'. L

Comment from Earth Serpent

Excellent

If I knew how to give you 6 stars I would, great job man, I wish I would have added a picture to mine. your veiws on vampires is very intriguing and i very much enjoyed your use of words.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

I am glad you liked it so much.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Matthew M.

Excellent

I like the alliteration of this poem and the way the colors of the words blend into the picture so well. Those vampires really are leeches sucking the blood out of people.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2013

thanks for your words and excellent review:)

Comment from SoldierPoet

Excellent

Very nice descriptive tribute to the creatures of the night. The words you used really painted a picture of these fascinating people. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Crystal Carey

Excellent

Hi Anup, this is a very thought provoking peace. It kind of makes me vision demons from the deep. Red happens to be my favorite color. Good job.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Well done 5-7-5. Love the alliteration in this. Wonderfully presented, too. Correct syllable count. Good luck in the contest~Debbie

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)