Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Exceptional

Wonderfully and beautifully inspiring! You speak to the soul with a minimum of syllables filled with a multitude of heart. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Aww....I am amazed and so glad.i appreciate your thoughts and 6 stars.it means a lot.Thanks for your kind words and exceptional review:-)

Comment from trevorletang

Excellent

Very well thought out Anupam. At first reading I did not really connect to your stated theme and image, but on viewing entire presentation holistically, I vote your production blood-curdlingly delightful

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from costellsgirl33

Excellent

I loved this poem! I loved the words that you used, very descriptive and creative! Vampires are indeed fascinating creatures. I just asked my other half the other day, I would like to meet the person who drew the first picture of a vampire and why he envisioned that is what a vampire would look like! Great job my friend

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Oh..it's a coincidence then..hehe..i am glad you shared your experience but the vampire girl in the pic is surely elegant,not with fangs..lol..and perhaps you may share this piece with your better half.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by costellsgirl33 on 09-Jul-2013

You are welcome and I will indeed! And yes the vampire girl is elegant indeed! Great picture

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Some very powerful words that create a wonderful image of the undead. I'm sure that Stoker would have enjoyed this as well. A great poem that fits the requirements well and makes for a great read. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from ephraim crud, COS.

Excellent

i normally hate this form of 'poetry,' but have to admit you have done a stellar job with this one and both eph and i wish you luck in the contest, connie

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Hello:-)
glad to see you for a change,not eph..hehe..and yes dark poems aren't liked much.but i love them and many reviewers have liked it.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Like what you did with this 5-7-5 my friend.Great photo to add to the words describing some of the darker sides of life
TK

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Amaaazing isn't it, how so much can be said in such few words. You have made your words count! Fabulous alliteration. Loved ... "love luminal life-liquor"! Wonderful choice of artwork as well.

Best wishes for the contest, Anupam!

bichonfrisegirl aka Connie

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Hello:-)
i am so glad to hear from you.and your words are really encouraging.it means a lot for me.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from in777wr#

Excellent

Short and to the point. This poem is well written. You communicated your message well. Interesting how each word in the first two lines starts with the letter L. The poem flows well.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

i love the topic and the execution! the alliteration is out of this world. very well written and shouldn't have to win the whole thing.
thank you for sharing!
god luck in the contest!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words,best wishes and excellent review:-)

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

This poem satisfies the rules of the 5-7-5 contest. The syllable count is perfect and the content should appeal to alliteration craving vampires.

Good luck with the contest!

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)