Twenty Years of Lost Freedom?
The 'What If' Anniversary13 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Oh my God! That's so funny!! I think it's human nature to ask what if. I did that a lot, until I met my husband. It was a second marriage fir us both. I think meeting the person you'll spend forever with, helps if you're both already fully cooked. That's my way of explaining maturity. Thought provoking writing!
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Oh my God! That's so funny!! I think it's human nature to ask what if. I did that a lot, until I met my husband. It was a second marriage fir us both. I think meeting the person you'll spend forever with, helps if you're both already fully cooked. That's my way of explaining maturity. Thought provoking writing!
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Hi Alex
Bless you for your lovely words. I always your reviews entertaining and thoughtful. You deserve a nomination.
Take care.
Peter
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Aww. Thank you so much, Peter!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
I gasped when I read the last line! He would rather rot in prison for 20 years than stay married to the girl he had a shotgun wedding with. What a powerful ending, and it puts a twist right at the end as to why he was drinking himself into oblivion. This is a thriller with a twist. I enjoyed reading this very much and think this one is a winner.
Jesse
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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I gasped when I read the last line! He would rather rot in prison for 20 years than stay married to the girl he had a shotgun wedding with. What a powerful ending, and it puts a twist right at the end as to why he was drinking himself into oblivion. This is a thriller with a twist. I enjoyed reading this very much and think this one is a winner.
Jesse
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Hi Jesse
Thanks for your splendid review.
Peter
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You're welcome, Peter.
Good luck with the contest.
Jesse
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really felt the tension in your story. Especially with how you set the scene with Audrey waking up and finding Gerald. The way you describe the situation with the shotgun - it's powerful. I love how your writing makes me feel the emotions of the characters so deeply. Keep up the great work - your storytelling is terrific!
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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I really felt the tension in your story. Especially with how you set the scene with Audrey waking up and finding Gerald. The way you describe the situation with the shotgun - it's powerful. I love how your writing makes me feel the emotions of the characters so deeply. Keep up the great work - your storytelling is terrific!
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2025
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Hi Michael
Thank you for your kind and inspiring review. The tension in the story was meaningful to you and the scene with Audrey and Gerald — both of those things make me glad. The fact that you pointed out that characters emotions were done well too is really very nice of you, that's always what I wish to obtain, the reader feeling like they are a part of the story. Your kind words about my storytelling truly put a fire under my abdomen to get writing again. Thanks for taking the time to comment, this is exactly the kind of feedback I need to continue! 😊
Kind regards
