Black Phoebe Among the Pigeons
Free verse poem about female black phoebe37 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your charming free verse for the contest. I love how this sweet little bird sits quietly with the pigeons waiting for romance to come to her.I can picture the damp morning after the rain with the blossoms all around.
A lovely entry. Good luck.
Nancy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I enjoyed your charming free verse for the contest. I love how this sweet little bird sits quietly with the pigeons waiting for romance to come to her.I can picture the damp morning after the rain with the blossoms all around.
A lovely entry. Good luck.
Nancy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your compliment-filled review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Crystie,
This is a fun free verse from the birds point of view about her past time in Mexico and the coming mating season. I like the personification, metaphor and internal rhyme used through the poem.
It gives strong images even without the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have rest of the great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Hi Crystie,
This is a fun free verse from the birds point of view about her past time in Mexico and the coming mating season. I like the personification, metaphor and internal rhyme used through the poem.
It gives strong images even without the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have rest of the great day.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your detailed review.
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No problem, Crystie.
Joan
Comment from Janet Foor
Sweet. A lovely poem to usher in Spring. We are bird watchers and your poem was a delightful one as I sit on my back porch and watch the wrens, robins, cardinals, bluebirds and yes, the pigeons. I will now be looking for black phoebes.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Sweet. A lovely poem to usher in Spring. We are bird watchers and your poem was a delightful one as I sit on my back porch and watch the wrens, robins, cardinals, bluebirds and yes, the pigeons. I will now be looking for black phoebes.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your kind review, from one bird enthusiast to another.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written free verse poem about the Black Phoebe. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery of the Black Phoebe. I love to read about birds. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This is a very well written free verse poem about the Black Phoebe. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery of the Black Phoebe. I love to read about birds. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your super review today.
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You are so welcome! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Dawn Munro
Awwwwwwww!!! What a sweet free verse, and THIS is what is meant when we say poetry should be evocative. Not only did this wonderful poem paint delightful pictures in my mind, I could 'hear' the cooing of the pigeons, 'feel' the spirit of the adorable "Carmen" bird.
Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Awwwwwwww!!! What a sweet free verse, and THIS is what is meant when we say poetry should be evocative. Not only did this wonderful poem paint delightful pictures in my mind, I could 'hear' the cooing of the pigeons, 'feel' the spirit of the adorable "Carmen" bird.
Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your enthusiastic and generous review!
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You are very welcome -- a pleasure.
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
magnificent poem about nature, this is the perfect topic for this spring season. the abundance of delightful details has left me very enchanted. many thanks
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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magnificent poem about nature, this is the perfect topic for this spring season. the abundance of delightful details has left me very enchanted. many thanks
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
One of the best things about FS is how much there is to learn about subjects I'd otherwise NEVER be privy to - like a bird called a Black Phoebe! Thank you for the enlightenment in the form of a delightful free-verse poem. I absolutely loved this part:
but is poised-like hope-among
the portly pigeon matrons.
Best of luck to you in the contest!! xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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One of the best things about FS is how much there is to learn about subjects I'd otherwise NEVER be privy to - like a bird called a Black Phoebe! Thank you for the enlightenment in the form of a delightful free-verse poem. I absolutely loved this part:
but is poised-like hope-among
the portly pigeon matrons.
Best of luck to you in the contest!! xoxo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for writing a personalized review!
Comment from gramalot8
I love listening to the different bird sounds. Your poem brings the sight and sounds of these different ones to life for your readers.
Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I love listening to the different bird sounds. Your poem brings the sight and sounds of these different ones to life for your readers.
Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Neonewman
This was a brilliantly written free-verse poem, my friend. I have to say, I had never heard of a black phoebe before. I enjoyed the line that spoke of the bird missing his warm winter home.
Great work.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This was a brilliantly written free-verse poem, my friend. I have to say, I had never heard of a black phoebe before. I enjoyed the line that spoke of the bird missing his warm winter home.
Great work.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your kind review.
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My pleasure, Crystie.
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written about this lovely bird and I know you must enjoy it. I don't know that I have ever seen one or would know what it looked like if I saw it. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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This is beautifully written about this lovely bird and I know you must enjoy it. I don't know that I have ever seen one or would know what it looked like if I saw it. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your super review and well wishes.
