Comment from pixiemillie

Excellent

Boy, you've said a mouthful with this naani. How difficult to say so much in so few words- -under the wire with 22. The artwork compliments some of the confusion we all feel at one time or another.

Thank you for sharing, Good luck in the contest, if it's still on.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2011

Thanks ever so much

Comment from cheery blossom

Excellent

Short poem, wise words., WI written. It don't take a lot of time or long speeches to Praise God, What we say and feel in our hearts to please Him and that is what counts. Keep up the good work know that you are loved. Cheery.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thanks for your review.God bless.

Comment from Kevin C

Excellent

This is a wonderful Naani with great thought in so few words. You form is great and you really challenge the reader to think. An excellent write.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thanks for your kind review

Comment from rudion

Excellent

Very cool. Few words but they pack a wallop of a punch. Whoever suggested you try art, after your illness, was right on as I'm sure it is therapeutic. Good job.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thanks for reviewing and yes she was right-was my teacher at dog's agility classes

Comment from londiscarpenter

Excellent

A good poem and a great message. Like all art writing is a skill that can be improved upon by doing is at every chance. The best writers are not those that just have an inborn talent but those that work hard to improve it.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thanks for your kind review

Comment from Justin Chopin

Excellent

It is most defintely hard work to inquire your own unique and innovative style of writing , painting , acting or whatever you do in any type of creative field. Great job with the poem Robina the message that you conveyed in this poem is also very true that without struggling or suffering for what you love creatively you will never know how good of an artist you will be because it is pain that brews passion in one's work.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thanks so much Boz

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, robina, a great job writing this poem about the creative process that helped you through a time that was hard for you, i envy that you can draw as well as write. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thank you so much

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

Thought it flowed very well and the structure seemed believable. This was very good. it sure does need to be recognized!
very creative and talented it draw on emotions with strong images

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011

Thanks so much for your kind review

Comment from DIS-illusioned

Good

--Interesting picture art choice to go with your theme.
--"Creative minds are a gift
You are not born with these"
To a larger (learning-aspect) extent, yes, though nature still plays a part.
--While I concur with much of your sentiment here, I come out of the reading not really gaining much.

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011

thanks for your review.Can see your point about not learning much-was not meant that way.Just a beginner and tryingto conquer the forms.

reply by DIS-illusioned on 24-Jul-2011

I see ... Well, good luck in your literary endeavors.

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

true words my friend what a great little poem so much from so few words love the picture too thank you so much for sharing it gazza

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2011

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2011

Thanks very much for your review