Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A well written 5-7-5 poem and lovely subject choice.
Your words create a lovely image of rich lavender blooms swaying in the breeze and releasing a heady perfume.
Your poem adheres well to the 5-7-5 format.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013

I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
beautiful descriptive detail with a strong sensory appeal to senses that extend beyond the visual
nice alliteration in sway silently and brisk breeze
This is quite lovely :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013

I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)

Comment from FrannyG

Excellent

This is a lovely haiku. Not a wasted word or syllable in it. And a very appealing image that is almost fragrant. I love 'night's mystic perfume'. Excellent.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013

I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

You hooked me with the lavender. I love the fragrance! Moon lit an mystic perfume. I like your 5-7-5, it is well written and 'up to the count'. :-) Carolyn

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013

Thank you so much for your lovely review! I love the fragrance too:)