Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "The Campground"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
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Comment from tfawcus
A tale with a twist. Those who venture into the domains of the wild should always be prepared. Prey and predator can swiftly take on a personal meaning!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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A tale with a twist. Those who venture into the domains of the wild should always be prepared. Prey and predator can swiftly take on a personal meaning!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thank you, my friend!~Debbie
Comment from mumsyone
Good horror story, with a surprise ending, Debbie.
Of course(,) our bears aren't as cute as Yogi when they tear up a campground," said the ranger, smiling.
Needing to urinate, she weighed the options,(:) the dark bathrooms by the garbage versus squatting where she was.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Good horror story, with a surprise ending, Debbie.
Of course(,) our bears aren't as cute as Yogi when they tear up a campground," said the ranger, smiling.
Needing to urinate, she weighed the options,(:) the dark bathrooms by the garbage versus squatting where she was.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Lois. Those darn comma's and semicolons. Do you know a good reference on semicolons? I don't know where I should use them. I could google it, but not tonight~Debbie
Comment from royowen
I didn't know these things could happen, the bear was attracted to the urine? The moral, never take a pee in one's tent, do it in your sleeping bag! good suspense and with the awesome mystery, well written It would have been horrible. blessings, my friend, Roy.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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I didn't know these things could happen, the bear was attracted to the urine? The moral, never take a pee in one's tent, do it in your sleeping bag! good suspense and with the awesome mystery, well written It would have been horrible. blessings, my friend, Roy.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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I'm not sure what attracted the bear, but there were real footprints. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
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Scary.
Comment from Realist101
OmG!...the ending was wonderfully unexpected and I don't remember you writing horror either! And you used Sue! Tho, I'm really Susan. LOL! Deb, when I was a kid, Dad took us to Yellowstone, and out to the Pacific. One night we stayed in a wood cabin and my brother and I were outside playing with Gumby and a plastic horse/Breyer...a huge! HUGE, cinnamon colored bear charged out of the woods and we ran screaming into the cabin. Mom was cooking bacon etc...for our early dinner. Dad had told her NOT to do that. Later that night, we heard a MAN screaming for his life. Dad packed us up and we drove out of there at 2 am....I'd write about it but a certain someone would accuse me of copying your story! Lol! x.
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OmG!...the ending was wonderfully unexpected and I don't remember you writing horror either! And you used Sue! Tho, I'm really Susan. LOL! Deb, when I was a kid, Dad took us to Yellowstone, and out to the Pacific. One night we stayed in a wood cabin and my brother and I were outside playing with Gumby and a plastic horse/Breyer...a huge! HUGE, cinnamon colored bear charged out of the woods and we ran screaming into the cabin. Mom was cooking bacon etc...for our early dinner. Dad had told her NOT to do that. Later that night, we heard a MAN screaming for his life. Dad packed us up and we drove out of there at 2 am....I'd write about it but a certain someone would accuse me of copying your story! Lol! x.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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You should write about it. There's no copyright on being scared silly. I'm writing more prose. Dean's book is very good and tempted me until I decided to write~Debbie xx
Comment from kiwijenny
Debbie this is great...
A true story ...tiny tale of terror.....until the last line...yay
Don't eat in bed I say...is the moral here ...
This was hard to bear...lol
God bless
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Debbie this is great...
A true story ...tiny tale of terror.....until the last line...yay
Don't eat in bed I say...is the moral here ...
This was hard to bear...lol
God bless
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, Debbie, you did an excellent job writing this story about the woman whose urine drew the bear to the campsite. I enjoyed reading it.
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this is an excellent write, Debbie, you did an excellent job writing this story about the woman whose urine drew the bear to the campsite. I enjoyed reading it.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie