Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Hmmm...I love the darkness of this well-written poem. The photo is perfection. Did you write the words first or were you inspired by the photo? "A killer of a party!" Sinful, deadly fun!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018

Thanks ?SINdy? it was picture first. My car siren temptress came came as the poetry. Thanks so much
Hugs,Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love this one Trisha and I can see that you have taken to your broomstick in your profile picture! You made me smile here and these words are like gems on the page, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Thanks Dolly, I took the week off,
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

This piece has an amazing photo with an great presentation. The colors created the mood to go with the outstanding picture. You've done a good job matching this poem with its picture and theme. A job well done. You created a creepy feel, with the beckoning...

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018

Glad you liked it. Thanks
Hugs Trisha

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Wow! What a scary poem and artwork. I think I'll pass on this party. Now I'll always wonder what's beneath the surface. lol.

Great job for Halloween. You should have put it in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2018

Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

sounds like a great party, Trisha. tell me what I can bring. you have definitely captured the Halloween spirit here with this poem.............meeshu

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 Comment Written 29-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018

Unlimited Liquor to drink yourself to death. Bring yourself as you are, you will not be needing a costume. We are all the same once the party starts. A skeleton crew will help you grant your wishes. Get somebody to drive you, because you wil not need your car anymore. The party will end when the watery grave is full.
Thanks a lot meeshu for you?re great review.
Hugs,Trisha

reply by meeshu on 08-Oct-2018

you should post this Reply as prose, it really flows.

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2018

You?re funny!

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Oh, wow! What a macabre picture and a poem that suits both the Halloween season and the ongoing season of wild parties where young people flirt with death in the form of a cocktail of dangerous and alluring drugs.

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 Comment Written 29-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2018

Mecabre, but the picture was fascinating. Thanks Tony for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha