Tonight's Victim Was Kathleen
Triplets29 total reviews
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
Deep. Intense. Provocatively luring. The atmosphere is cast as tightly as the taut piano wire. The sensation draws on the imagination...
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Deep. Intense. Provocatively luring. The atmosphere is cast as tightly as the taut piano wire. The sensation draws on the imagination...
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Why thank you, ma'am!!! What an awesome review. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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anytime (as a matter of fact, that's song I love!)
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anytime (as a matter of fact, that's song I love!)
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Sigh, me too!!!
Comment from riley289
A descriptive and haunting poem.
The callous nature of you're killer is described brilliantly in the calm stroll he takes after the storm of the murder is complete.
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A descriptive and haunting poem.
The callous nature of you're killer is described brilliantly in the calm stroll he takes after the storm of the murder is complete.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Yeah he's a real bad one, he is!!! Thanks you for liking my change up write. Dark is good too!!!
Comment from richard7
Poor Kathleen, the Bogetman came for real!
Well described triplets, tercets or triolets!
The stormy picture brings across the garrotful evening well!
I like the little pinpointing noise of the water squished beneath his feet, verse!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Poor Kathleen, the Bogetman came for real!
Well described triplets, tercets or triolets!
The stormy picture brings across the garrotful evening well!
I like the little pinpointing noise of the water squished beneath his feet, verse!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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LOL thanks you. Liked that little nuance eh? MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Irene D. Garces
A serial killer on the loose. An alphabet killer now looking for the next victim. Thanks God, he'd his G & I already. Therefore, we are free...LOL..
This is just a pause to those Romance poetry, right. And what a perfectly chosen pause this can be. I was thrilled to death (OA) but was relieved upon knowing I and you are free.
Can't help liking this piece too.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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A serial killer on the loose. An alphabet killer now looking for the next victim. Thanks God, he'd his G & I already. Therefore, we are free...LOL..
This is just a pause to those Romance poetry, right. And what a perfectly chosen pause this can be. I was thrilled to death (OA) but was relieved upon knowing I and you are free.
Can't help liking this piece too.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Yeah we're safe ... this time around. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH. Thanks you!!!
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is really interesting. It's like a mini horror story. Your story is chilling and intriguing. I really enjoyed reading it very much. Excellent read, God bless you!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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This is really interesting. It's like a mini horror story. Your story is chilling and intriguing. I really enjoyed reading it very much. Excellent read, God bless you!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Thanks so much Harley!! I like that!!!
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You're very welcome. I hope you have a blessed weekend. Marilyn
Comment from Connie P
Very strong, spag free writing. You did a great job with this flash fiction piece. Will you continue with the story about his next victim?
Connie
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Very strong, spag free writing. You did a great job with this flash fiction piece. Will you continue with the story about his next victim?
Connie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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Nah, it's just that, flash fiction and a break over to the dark side from the love poetry. LOL thanks so much Connie!!!
Comment from sasil
Love the chilling internal rhyme and alliteration! Not so much grisly (though this method DOES produce lots of leaky gore) as suspenseful--Hitchcock inspired? Classic noire, this poem-form story unfolds quickly and leaves the reader gasping with questions: Who is the un-named killer? What motivates him? Does he know his victims? Will he ever be caught? What will letter "X"'s name be?
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Love the chilling internal rhyme and alliteration! Not so much grisly (though this method DOES produce lots of leaky gore) as suspenseful--Hitchcock inspired? Classic noire, this poem-form story unfolds quickly and leaves the reader gasping with questions: Who is the un-named killer? What motivates him? Does he know his victims? Will he ever be caught? What will letter "X"'s name be?
Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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LOL yer a nut you know that? Maybe he'll be caught before he ever gets to X!!!!! LOO, thanks so much Sasil for a great review here!!!
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I don't know...lots of words rhyme with "Xanadu" (lol).
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LOL they do?
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honey-dew, bug-a-boo, coo-coo-ca-choo...yeah, I need to get some sleep! Loved the poem--keep up the good writes!
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Me too you. Can barely see!!! LOL. Work tomorrow but it's Friday!!! Yay, I'll be so happy for the damned weekend.
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tgif!
Comment from Ntorious
WOW. The title alone got my attention. Excellent excellent description. Verbiage flowed with ease. I enjoyed eadig this. I felt like I was there watching the killing.
Well written.
You need to continue with the alphabet killer.
I was interested from beginning to end
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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WOW. The title alone got my attention. Excellent excellent description. Verbiage flowed with ease. I enjoyed eadig this. I felt like I was there watching the killing.
Well written.
You need to continue with the alphabet killer.
I was interested from beginning to end
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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LOL, gotcha eh? This is where I run to for a break from the love poems ... all the way over to the dark side. Thanks girl!!!
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you went dark eh! Go girl. You did more than run, Come on bring some more
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I think it's fun to see if you can keep people reading it or not. LOL.
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it did for real, great job
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MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from Maustin
A spooky read!! You captured me throughout. I love your triplet style of form. I saw each line come alive in this brilliant piece. Very nicely done. I absolutely loved it!! May I ask...what inspired this riveting work? A must read. This could transform into a very good short story.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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A spooky read!! You captured me throughout. I love your triplet style of form. I saw each line come alive in this brilliant piece. Very nicely done. I absolutely loved it!! May I ask...what inspired this riveting work? A must read. This could transform into a very good short story.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2010
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I always run to the dark side when I want a break from the love poems. Things just pop into my head and off we go. Who knows? Too many years of horror movies maybe. lOL. Thanks so much you!!!
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I love horror/suspense and great mystery movies too. You are so welcome. I love all of your works.