Gerald Rames
no quarter, no slack for27 total reviews
Comment from vickib
Gerald we know him. I think there's a lot more in this than you revealed. He gets along well and does what he wants but wonders if a commitment might have saved him from a lot of pain or a different more wholesome life. Ok I could be way off but lately I wonder about what if a lot in the reverse of this. Except living in Detroit that's a stretch for country girl. No quarter? Tell me what that refers to.
Nice to meet you Reconciled!
XO
Vicki
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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Gerald we know him. I think there's a lot more in this than you revealed. He gets along well and does what he wants but wonders if a commitment might have saved him from a lot of pain or a different more wholesome life. Ok I could be way off but lately I wonder about what if a lot in the reverse of this. Except living in Detroit that's a stretch for country girl. No quarter? Tell me what that refers to.
Nice to meet you Reconciled!
XO
Vicki
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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Hey vicki Good morning -smile- You do?...alright -smile- I wrote this for the video....I have a special connection to eight mile rd. lol yea, it was stretch for me too....good thing I'm flexable lol Thank ya dear ;love Michael
Comment from MizKat
This is cute, Michael. I enjoyed the read. I was wondering if you'd read my essay called My Friends at FanStory. It's not really long. Thanks, Kat
P.S. If you haven't seen it floating around you can find it at my profile.
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This is cute, Michael. I enjoyed the read. I was wondering if you'd read my essay called My Friends at FanStory. It's not really long. Thanks, Kat
P.S. If you haven't seen it floating around you can find it at my profile.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
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Good morning Kat -smile- yes...I will be their in a minute -smile- love Michael
Comment from l.raven
Michael, Where did this one come from??? Don't know the story. But I love the way you write and the forms of your poems. I used to wonder as a kid if I could fly. Computer still messing up.Damn!!! Linda xxoo hugs
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Michael, Where did this one come from??? Don't know the story. But I love the way you write and the forms of your poems. I used to wonder as a kid if I could fly. Computer still messing up.Damn!!! Linda xxoo hugs
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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Ahhh Well I'll tell ya....been dying to use this video all day....so here we go -smile- I respect the dude...I came from eight mile too I know I know....its over relax love you girl Michael
Comment from mountainwriter49
Ciao, Michael,
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. A bit different
from your recent ones. I liked it very much. My
fav lines are:
Enthralled
not because he survived
but because he thrived
May I offer a suggestion for you to consider?
soon after he[it] kicked his unfriendly ass
Michael, if the 'he' is referring to the "impossible' in the previous line, then you'd want to use 'it' rather than 'he'.
Well done,
RR
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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Ciao, Michael,
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. A bit different
from your recent ones. I liked it very much. My
fav lines are:
Enthralled
not because he survived
but because he thrived
May I offer a suggestion for you to consider?
soon after he[it] kicked his unfriendly ass
Michael, if the 'he' is referring to the "impossible' in the previous line, then you'd want to use 'it' rather than 'he'.
Well done,
RR
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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Hi Ray...-smile- I just wanted something to go with the video...I fixed it...thanks Ray. Yea, I could have taken more time huh? I'm not real big on rap...but I like this one. Ya still like me? lol love ya bro Michael
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I thought the poem was perfect. I didn't activate the video. I never do activate them when I read poetry. The words in the lines are the music to me. but then again, I'm an old man. yeah, of course I still like ya. )
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lol Bless you Ray-
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prego
Comment from Connie C
I liked reading about this Gerald Ranes. In fact, I could have
read more. I like the idea that he had no back plan but just
planned to wing it instead. Wouldn't it be nice if we could all
do that and be happy? Thanks for sharing. My best to you,
as always.
Connie
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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I liked reading about this Gerald Ranes. In fact, I could have
read more. I like the idea that he had no back plan but just
planned to wing it instead. Wouldn't it be nice if we could all
do that and be happy? Thanks for sharing. My best to you,
as always.
Connie
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2013
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Thank you Connie....for enjoying -smile- and to you fair lady love Michael
Comment from Deborah Marie
Nice photo choice to go with your poem. I'm impressed with the progression, rythm and flow which lends to a good read.
And, nice use of wording and video. Thanks for sharing, Deb
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Nice photo choice to go with your poem. I'm impressed with the progression, rythm and flow which lends to a good read.
And, nice use of wording and video. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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Hi Debra -smile- thank you...wrote it for the video, very happy you enjoyed it love Michael
Comment from RaymondJohn
A good man as good men go is an interesting description. I think you could have written another stanza or two, but it's fine the way it is. Good imagery and use of language. Ray
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A good man as good men go is an interesting description. I think you could have written another stanza or two, but it's fine the way it is. Good imagery and use of language. Ray
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2013
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Hey Ray -smile- good morning to ya. Thank you sir for enjoying love Michael