Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel

Excellent

Today's culture and media seemed very charmed with vampires, so I think your poem vey trimly. It was a pleasure to contemplate your careful word choices.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

You have satisfied the writing prompt format, with this dark,
well crafted five-seven-five. Alliteration is effectively employed. An appropriate visual as well.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by Rmocruz on 21-Jul-2013

You're welcome.

Comment from donnadiann

Excellent

Correct 5-7-5 form. Very strong alliteration that are also descriptive of your fictional subject. But I feel vampires are being overused these days.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Brocha1

Excellent

This is a great velvety read. You have chosen wonderful words. I love the use of the letter "V" to portray the vampires. Life-liquor-what a great metaphor.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from LeMuseNoir

Excellent

Very nice. Redolent and atmospheric for all its brevity. Creepily alliterative - just the right touch of macabre humor. A fitting jewel to adorn the nefarious nocturnal nosferatu.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Lurk lusty leeches
love luminal life-liquor
rave resurrection

A very lusty write Anupam and one in which you can count on to be very real. Heehe. Love the alliteration in this piece.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Thanks

reply by Gungalo on 20-Jul-2013

Smile.

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

truly beautiful artistry and presentation

your words are as passionate and powerful just as the red they are penned with

format is true to form
well done throughout
thank you for sharing
good luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

I appreciate your encouraging review and it holds a great value.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

Talk about short and not so sweet. you were able to get the point across quite easily with very few words.I hope you will continue to follow your dream of writing. I believe you have a future. thanks so much for sharing and good luck. By the way, I loved the picture!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

I appreciate your kind words of encouragement and hold a great value for me.a hearty thanks for sharing this and excellent review:-)

Comment from Quillian

Good

I see your poem is about Vampires, but I thought they were bloodless creatures? I see that as a conflict with your title. Revival of the red. I also think your first line would make more sense if it read' Lusty leeches lurk'., adjective, noun and then verb. I like the red letters on black. Good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

You should have read the notes.
Revival of the read is for a human not the vampire.
And 'leeches...love' are in a link,not seperate sentences.
That's a very good reason to rate a poem lower when you don't get it.
Perhaps skipping would have been better,but no,dollars count.

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

More important than your fine alliteration your brief poem is loaded with uncanny content. I have two huge trees outside my home and at night their foliage are full, not with birds but with bats; maybe vampire bats. One brushed past my cheek and I thought he felt quite cuddly and cute. Your poem does raise a question. Can we believe in reincarnation? Vampire bats or not. I find it hard to put my faith in reincarnation. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

Hello
I appreciate your comments and sharing.
I believe in reincarnation,but not this way.this is just fiction,though I like these vampire stuff a lot.
I think we all are re born after we die and the form you possess and the conditions too,depend on one's sins.
Thanks for sharing and for the excellent rating.
Have a great weekend:-)