Unintentional
Some people just set off that emotion instantly49 total reviews
Comment from GWinterwin
Good words, and a good picture to tell of that person who just seems to have a way with setting people off. Words that rip, and tear at the heart, and soul of another person.
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Good words, and a good picture to tell of that person who just seems to have a way with setting people off. Words that rip, and tear at the heart, and soul of another person.
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Thank you
Comment from seaglass
There's a lost less thinking and a lot more speaking around these days. The cycle tongue goes all the way to the top with people who see themselves as leaders. Your poem gives good advice and is what well brought-up people were raised to know.
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There's a lost less thinking and a lot more speaking around these days. The cycle tongue goes all the way to the top with people who see themselves as leaders. Your poem gives good advice and is what well brought-up people were raised to know.
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Thank you
Comment from Leineco
Excellent advice and well penned senryu.
Human foibles are often the topic of senryu - and you have
taken on one most universal - - -
thoughtless callousness not easily taken back or ameliorated.
Best of luck in the voting booth :-)
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Excellent advice and well penned senryu.
Human foibles are often the topic of senryu - and you have
taken on one most universal - - -
thoughtless callousness not easily taken back or ameliorated.
Best of luck in the voting booth :-)
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Thank you
Comment from Cheryl9359
Good poem and it says a lot, true we need to think before speaking. Good luck in the contest! Have a wonderful Sunday night!
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Good poem and it says a lot, true we need to think before speaking. Good luck in the contest! Have a wonderful Sunday night!
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Thank you Cheryl
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, love this senryu my dear whoever you are. A little diarrhea of the mouth.
One should always think before they speak and that goes double for think twice before they write, and then some people are just downright nasty.
Super job with this. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Ha, love this senryu my dear whoever you are. A little diarrhea of the mouth.
One should always think before they speak and that goes double for think twice before they write, and then some people are just downright nasty.
Super job with this. Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Thank you Gloria
Comment from acerisestory
Your senryu is a lesson for us all, mystery poet.
Your first two lines are a great introduction to your very clever 'satori.'
The artwork you've chosen to complement your work is perfect!
Best of luck in the contest! I think it's a strong entry. Take care. Alana
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Your senryu is a lesson for us all, mystery poet.
Your first two lines are a great introduction to your very clever 'satori.'
The artwork you've chosen to complement your work is perfect!
Best of luck in the contest! I think it's a strong entry. Take care. Alana
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Thank you Alana
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You are welcome!
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You are welcome!
Comment from foxangie123
Kool picture and great poem but a Senryu has no pictures and has title restrictions per the Japanese who created it. A great regular poem but not a Senryu.
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Kool picture and great poem but a Senryu has no pictures and has title restrictions per the Japanese who created it. A great regular poem but not a Senryu.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your comments
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You are very talented...
Comment from Dean Kuch
Good advice, and some of the best.
The words we speak are not like words we typed on the keyboard of our computers. There is no magical "DELETE" button to remove those words once they've left our mouth. By then, the damage has been done and it is too late. Even sometimes saying I'm sorry is not enough.
Best to err on the side of caution and keep you're pie hole zipped shut.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
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Good advice, and some of the best.
The words we speak are not like words we typed on the keyboard of our computers. There is no magical "DELETE" button to remove those words once they've left our mouth. By then, the damage has been done and it is too late. Even sometimes saying I'm sorry is not enough.
Best to err on the side of caution and keep you're pie hole zipped shut.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
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Thank you Dean
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Yep
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Yep
Comment from Judvan2
Good poem for contest. Very true. Maybe if we can remember we have value and it doesn't change because of what anybody says, we can learn to ignore those words more often. Good luck!
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Good poem for contest. Very true. Maybe if we can remember we have value and it doesn't change because of what anybody says, we can learn to ignore those words more often. Good luck!
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Thank you
Comment from RodG
Although your message is not novel, it iss succinctly stated and needs to be heard again and again.
Good word choices "callous," "spontaneous," "abrasive" emphasize the serious tone needed to get people to listen.
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Although your message is not novel, it iss succinctly stated and needs to be heard again and again.
Good word choices "callous," "spontaneous," "abrasive" emphasize the serious tone needed to get people to listen.
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Thank you Rod