Comment from Air Spirit

Excellent

Hi.. I enjoyed your story.. and the chase was particularly interesting and suspenseful.. your words we're visually creative and captured the mood, tone and environment of yesteryear... I was also interested in the Shawnees, as my mom was born in Shawneetown, Illinois..and it's name is self-explanatory.. very enjoyable..

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Thank you Airspirit. A big concern ablut my writing has been if it was descriptive enough. I picked the Shawnees because they were the dominant trib around here( PA) i appreciat your kind words and the great rating.

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Hopefully he got away with out much trouble and was able to find his canoe to escape with. Four against one isn't good odds in any language and they meant business. He had no weapons to protect himself.

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2018

Not to be a spoiler, but he did walk off of a cliff. How's the action looking? I do appreciate you reading, and thank you for the great rating.

reply by country ranch writer on 28-Sep-2018

So walking off the cliff makes me think he fell the 50 feet into the water below. After all he was right there!