Ode to Child's Pose
Discovering Yoga95 total reviews
Comment from Ponder
Hi Amada,
I practice yoga myself and found this poem was an excellent written expression of what yoga does for me. your descriptions are lovely and wrapped up in very nicely formed verses. I thought this was an interesting use of the word list for the competition.
Good luck in the contest.
Jules
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2010
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Hi Amada,
I practice yoga myself and found this poem was an excellent written expression of what yoga does for me. your descriptions are lovely and wrapped up in very nicely formed verses. I thought this was an interesting use of the word list for the competition.
Good luck in the contest.
Jules
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2010
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Thank you Jules for reviewing this work!
Comment from wvfreespirit
Enjoyed your peom. I recently began taking yoga myself and I absolutely love it. My instructor usually reads a positive piece of writing to us after class and your work was very relxing, which brought that to mind. Well done
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Enjoyed your peom. I recently began taking yoga myself and I absolutely love it. My instructor usually reads a positive piece of writing to us after class and your work was very relxing, which brought that to mind. Well done
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Thank you wfreespirit, my yoga instructor read a peace of insightful material also, great final touch to a class. Namaste!
Comment from nancyjam
I like what you have created with the
required words. There is a peacefulness
that comes when reading
your poetic descriptions of the pose.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2010
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I like what you have created with the
required words. There is a peacefulness
that comes when reading
your poetic descriptions of the pose.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2010
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Thank you Nancy!
Comment from spiceydog
The rhythms you crafted mimic the yoga experience; I found myself in the moment and breathing in synch with your experience. How relaxing - thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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The rhythms you crafted mimic the yoga experience; I found myself in the moment and breathing in synch with your experience. How relaxing - thank you.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much for commenting in this work.
Comment from Sharkey
Some parts of this seem just a tad bit choppy but aside from that, this is an overall well written poem. You have done well threading the nine words together.
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Some parts of this seem just a tad bit choppy but aside from that, this is an overall well written poem. You have done well threading the nine words together.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much for commenting in this work.
Comment from misscookie
I always love watching people do that
I love the artwork I was told it is good for you mind , body and soul. after reading your poem I believe it true.
good write
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2010
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I always love watching people do that
I love the artwork I was told it is good for you mind , body and soul. after reading your poem I believe it true.
good write
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2010
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Thank you for the great review!
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your welcome.
Comment from flyboy130
I love this poem so much it brings feelings to me. I would like to know one thing about you amada. Do you like cats or dogs.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2010
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I love this poem so much it brings feelings to me. I would like to know one thing about you amada. Do you like cats or dogs.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2010
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Thanks you for reviewing my work. I have cats. So I think I like cats more than dogs...
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ok thank you.
Comment from Njorgensen
Smooth and easy. This poem was gentle and zen-like in its delivery. I could almost feel the stretches. lol I thought you did a good job with expressing your inner emotions of it. Thank you for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Smooth and easy. This poem was gentle and zen-like in its delivery. I could almost feel the stretches. lol I thought you did a good job with expressing your inner emotions of it. Thank you for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Thank you Nancy for feeling the emotional and physical stretches of this work.
Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Amada,
This is a very well written free verse which smoothly incorporated the given words for this contest.It flows well, I enjoyed reading it. Child pose in yoga are very interesting. Your poem described it very well. Best wishes in the contest.
Anabella
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Hi Amada,
This is a very well written free verse which smoothly incorporated the given words for this contest.It flows well, I enjoyed reading it. Child pose in yoga are very interesting. Your poem described it very well. Best wishes in the contest.
Anabella
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2010
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Thank you for commenting and reviewing this work.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is so very well written, it's words transported me to watch in my mind the pose you were writing about. it is vivid and expressive, good flow, good meter, good form. i wish you luck in the contest
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2010
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this is so very well written, it's words transported me to watch in my mind the pose you were writing about. it is vivid and expressive, good flow, good meter, good form. i wish you luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2010
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Thank you for reading my work and for the best wishes!