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Comment from DALLAS01
How right you are, and then we have to grow up. But now it is our job to fill our own world with all the beauty and serenity we can find.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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How right you are, and then we have to grow up. But now it is our job to fill our own world with all the beauty and serenity we can find.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Techster
Marvelous, Marvelous, Marvelous! Just marvelous! I love how you never said it was a butterfly or a caterpillar, and how much detail you give. I also love all the Visuals I got while reading. Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Marvelous, Marvelous, Marvelous! Just marvelous! I love how you never said it was a butterfly or a caterpillar, and how much detail you give. I also love all the Visuals I got while reading. Great job!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is such a lovely and meaningful poem and it is written well with only a few words. You say so much in your short 5-7-5 poem. This one is a winner. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
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This is such a lovely and meaningful poem and it is written well with only a few words. You say so much in your short 5-7-5 poem. This one is a winner. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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I appreciate and respect your encouraging words and the 6 star rating.it means a lot to me.Thanks for your kind words,wishes and exceptional review:-)
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You are very welcome. I hope you have a blessed weekend. :)
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With your good wishes,it surely will be.and you too have a wonderful weekend:-)
Comment from DiamondGirlz61
Excellent work of words displayed here! You have a great imagination from the way you put your words on this poem! The meaning is very significant for the reader. You captured that in this poem.
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Excellent work of words displayed here! You have a great imagination from the way you put your words on this poem! The meaning is very significant for the reader. You captured that in this poem.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from Sindhuri Balaraman
Its a very good haiku, which brings to life the harsh reality, children face when they transit from their juvenile phase to the 'grown-up' phase...Everyday I face, is ugly and competitive and everyday I wish to go back to my school days - a life where my worst day was when I didn't polish my shoes!;) Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck in the contest!
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Its a very good haiku, which brings to life the harsh reality, children face when they transit from their juvenile phase to the 'grown-up' phase...Everyday I face, is ugly and competitive and everyday I wish to go back to my school days - a life where my worst day was when I didn't polish my shoes!;) Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thank you
Comment from Lady Veloce
I love poetry that invokes feelings in people, and your poem does just that. It captures a moment in time with such beauty and perfection that it leaves a lasting impression. Congratulations! Fantastic work.
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I love poetry that invokes feelings in people, and your poem does just that. It captures a moment in time with such beauty and perfection that it leaves a lasting impression. Congratulations! Fantastic work.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from Callyope
This is a very creative thought that constructs this 5-7-5. To witness night's dangers from the shelter of one's home is an exciting and cautious thought. Well done, my friend...
May I suggest one of my pieces that I think you'll enjoy based on the theme of this one? It's not currently promoted so it only offers 2 cents, but you simply must check it out. It's titled, "Cocoon Resurrection," and can be found in my portfolio, chapter 8 of the book, 'Absent Boundaries.' It's free verse...
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This is a very creative thought that constructs this 5-7-5. To witness night's dangers from the shelter of one's home is an exciting and cautious thought. Well done, my friend...
May I suggest one of my pieces that I think you'll enjoy based on the theme of this one? It's not currently promoted so it only offers 2 cents, but you simply must check it out. It's titled, "Cocoon Resurrection," and can be found in my portfolio, chapter 8 of the book, 'Absent Boundaries.' It's free verse...
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
i will surely check that out.and share my views too with you.have a nice day.
Comment from ronnie k
Sharma this poem is very deep, but you gave me an easier look at the look of the involving of grown and the prized value of youth and the care of growing. I like this because of the write but mostly for the message that is open for interpretation, WELL DONE.
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Sharma this poem is very deep, but you gave me an easier look at the look of the involving of grown and the prized value of youth and the care of growing. I like this because of the write but mostly for the message that is open for interpretation, WELL DONE.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
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Thank you for opening my mind. May I call you BROTHER?
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Yes,of course.you don't need to ask that.this site is like a family for all of us:-)
Comment from bhogg
A very pleasant read accompanied by appropriate artwork. The contests are always tough, but looks to me like you fit the requirements. Best of luck. Bill
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A very pleasant read accompanied by appropriate artwork. The contests are always tough, but looks to me like you fit the requirements. Best of luck. Bill
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)
Comment from Insane Membrane
nice try ... I could see where you were going and it would be a nice subject to expand further than the 5 7 5 comp will allow
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nice try ... I could see where you were going and it would be a nice subject to expand further than the 5 7 5 comp will allow
Comment Written 05-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
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Perhaps it requires power of VISION,rarely found these days.
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are you being sarcastic ? I only just got to this site and your attitude stinks ... I just said it would be a lovely subject to expand on what is your problem ?????
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Oh..i just told what i felt...can't help it..have a nice day
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Reading the write conveys the requirements.i think you again missed that 5/7/5 tag...and you know what..it is supposed to be a THREE liner...must be a surprise..anyways get over it
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dont insinuate that I am stupid !!! I got the 5 7 5 ...