Comment from PoesyPoet

Excellent

This was brilliant on all counts. I liked the red lettering on black and the "l" words just made this lovely little ditty flow like butter. Good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner to me. PP

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013

That's so sweet of you.I appreciate your lovely words.thanks for the generous rating:-)

Comment from krys123

Excellent

The deserves a 6 star but I have only 5. It's a well done senryu and displays that eerie an ominous feeling in which the ladies of the night have. It is well penned in very easily to read for a short piece it says more than is written. Thank you for sharing such a nice piece.
You have a good one in God bless
AK

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

I appreciate your comments and thoughts.it means a lot.a hearty thanks:-)

reply by krys123 on 19-Jul-2013

You welcome
AK

Comment from Emma L Saville

Excellent

Amazing that those few words can conjure up such a startlingly clear image. Very well put together. I especially like the line 'love luminal life-liquor' which makes me think of the vampires urge for blood is of course its 'liquor'. Clever. Also - great picture.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

I appreciate your comments.thanks for sharing this and the excellent rating:-)

Comment from invisible.touch

Excellent

This is reeking of vampirish impish all that is evil and stinkishness. You have created a tiny piece of blood-curdling. I hope this is not about anyone you are acquainted with as if I were you I would run away. Quick. This is very tight and well written. I hope you are proud of yourself. invisible.touch x

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

I don't know any such person...lol...otherwise I will be gone with the wind.
I appreciate your words of praise and encouragements.a hearty thanks:-)

Comment from Dudemanguy

Excellent

Wow man this is awesome, thot I'd pay a visit...keep seeing ure name on reviews for me (Thanks!) I like this piece, great subject, pic & coloring...awesome!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

Thanks for the visit and sharing this and for the rating too:-)

Comment from BunnyS

Excellent

You really put together a nice package, with the poem and the picture. They are perfect! Loved the poem! It always amazes me when someone can take so few words, especially in a 5-7-5 format, and have it make perfect sense. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013

I appreciate your words of support.thanks for the excellent rating:-)

Comment from JessicaAshley

Excellent

Very nice! Kudos to being able to do this particular type of poetry so well. I've never managed to be able to do it. Vampires have always intrigued me. Nice work.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013

Thanks for sharing,support and the fab five red stars:-)

Comment from Dragus

Excellent

A great use of alliteration throughout. Loved your word choice on Luminal Life liquor. The life source pumping in our veins.
Great work

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013

Thanks for sharing and excellent review:-)

Comment from _maynard_

Excellent

It flows real good gives you a good image of what is being said to the reader paints the right picture and I enjoyed reading it thanks

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013

thanks for excellent review:)

Comment from Titanx9

Excellent

This is an excellent metaphorical piece that's creative and well-written. In this one, it seems you've compared vampires to leeches in that they both suck out the life blood. Well done!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013

I am glad you liked it.thanks for sharing this and for the excellent rating:)