What is love
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello kahpot
what you wrote in your couplet rhyming poem about what love is so true and I like where you say- Love is
preparing life for our child
Love is- knowing they will not stay
Love is- showing them the way
(Until- they leave their nest)
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Hello kahpot
what you wrote in your couplet rhyming poem about what love is so true and I like where you say- Love is
preparing life for our child
Love is- knowing they will not stay
Love is- showing them the way
(Until- they leave their nest)
Gert
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, it is hard to describe love it is individual****kahpot
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You are welcome kahpot
It's a good thought to think that love is an individual
Comment from Pantygynt
The last four lines raise this from a simple definitive poem by looking at the consequences of employing the definitions that make up the first part of the poem
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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The last four lines raise this from a simple definitive poem by looking at the consequences of employing the definitions that make up the first part of the poem
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much, and congratulations to you for a wonderful and very well earnt win with your Tanka****kahpot
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Beautiful description of what love is and pretty much all inclusive. There is very little left out. I love the photo. It wraps up what you have said in words. Very nicely done, so much so that as I read it again, I am changing to a six star review. Creative, flowing, ethereal, awesome. Great Job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Beautiful description of what love is and pretty much all inclusive. There is very little left out. I love the photo. It wraps up what you have said in words. Very nicely done, so much so that as I read it again, I am changing to a six star review. Creative, flowing, ethereal, awesome. Great Job!
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Wow! thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, kahpot, with your love is poem. While I did not see the original, this one reds [flows] well. I like the first line to set the tone. The rhymes are great, too. Each line seems to build on the others leading up to it. The concluding line sum up nicely with a contrast of 'how; love does/does not work in real life. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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You did a great job, kahpot, with your love is poem. While I did not see the original, this one reds [flows] well. I like the first line to set the tone. The rhymes are great, too. Each line seems to build on the others leading up to it. The concluding line sum up nicely with a contrast of 'how; love does/does not work in real life. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem show that love has happiness and sadness in it. It shows that love that is spread comes back to you. Even if kids fly the coop, they do return to visit. They don't totally leave.
Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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This poem show that love has happiness and sadness in it. It shows that love that is spread comes back to you. Even if kids fly the coop, they do return to visit. They don't totally leave.
Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Exactly and Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are so kindly welcome, Kahpot
dp
Comment from royowen
Love is many things as you point out, it's more than an emotion, much more than something that we put words, although all your reasons are legitimate, well done, beautifully written, my friend, good job, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Love is many things as you point out, it's more than an emotion, much more than something that we put words, although all your reasons are legitimate, well done, beautifully written, my friend, good job, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from meeshu
I was not here in 2/17 but I am here now. I love this 'rote' poem. this kind of write does well set to music, a song. a powerful love song/poem, Kahpot...........meeshu
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I was not here in 2/17 but I am here now. I love this 'rote' poem. this kind of write does well set to music, a song. a powerful love song/poem, Kahpot...........meeshu
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much , My friend truly appreciated****kahpot
Comment from nomi338
1 Corinthians, Chapter 13, verses 4-8 states: â?¯Love is patient and kind. Love is not jealous. It does not brag, does not get puffed up, 5â?¯does not behave indecently, does not look for its own interests, does not become provoked. It does not keep account of the injury. 6â?¯It does not rejoice over unrighteousness, but rejoices with the truth. 7â?¯It bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things. 8â?¯Love never fails
If you get it wrong, your relationship may fall off the rails.
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1 Corinthians, Chapter 13, verses 4-8 states: â?¯Love is patient and kind. Love is not jealous. It does not brag, does not get puffed up, 5â?¯does not behave indecently, does not look for its own interests, does not become provoked. It does not keep account of the injury. 6â?¯It does not rejoice over unrighteousness, but rejoices with the truth. 7â?¯It bears all things, believes all things, hopes all things, endures all things. 8â?¯Love never fails
If you get it wrong, your relationship may fall off the rails.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Your poem was a delight to read. It inspired me to write what I wrote. I apologize for not telling you that in the review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is beautiful Kahpot. You've captured superbly what love is in these few verses you've shared here. I like the excellent way you describe all of the elements of what love is. It flows and rhymes beautifully from beginning to end. I commend you on this well written work. I enjoyed this! Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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This is beautiful Kahpot. You've captured superbly what love is in these few verses you've shared here. I like the excellent way you describe all of the elements of what love is. It flows and rhymes beautifully from beginning to end. I commend you on this well written work. I enjoyed this! Well done!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your encouraging and excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
This is lovely.. Every line that tells what love is, is absolutely true..I have found it to be so in my married life and as a mother. I love the rhyme as it is my favorite. I will go back and read the original but this one is so great, I can only imagine that the other version was just as well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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This is lovely.. Every line that tells what love is, is absolutely true..I have found it to be so in my married life and as a mother. I love the rhyme as it is my favorite. I will go back and read the original but this one is so great, I can only imagine that the other version was just as well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot