Comment from hari anand

Excellent

Thats very creative, I love the L Work it flows so smoothly. Rave resurrection perfect satorie.picture perfect. Great work.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from fdgsr

Excellent

In general I do not like 5-7-5 style. It is too restrictive. I let any poem take the form of its own rhythm and rhyme. I never force it into a mold. Sometimes I find a mold ready made for my theme. I only wrote two such poems in my life. Thanks for this. I understand the underlying meaning, or have faked it. Thanks for this.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from H Darwin Reeves

Excellent

Interesting. Read in the light of a vampire this makes good sense. Great imagery. "Lurk lusty leeches
love luminal life-liquor" great description of a vampire. You've packed a lot of description in a few words. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

I appreciate your comments.
Thanks for your lovely words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi AS,
Creative and thought provoking - I'm not sure I truly understand what you wisdom is in this one. But creative imagery for sure. Your syllables are spot on.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

"Lurk lusty leeches 5
love luminal life-liquor 7
rave resurrection " 5

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

Hello:-)
The first and second line depict their typical traits.
The word 'luminal' is tricky here and doesn't mean 'glowing'.It refers to the class of medicines classified as sedatives.
I am glad to receive a review from you.thanks for the excellent rating:-).
You truly are an inspiration.

Regards
Anupam

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

5-7-5 about blood suckers. The poem is good and right on but when wading in water where they live; always carry a sharp knife or burn them loose with a match.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

Thanks for sharing your words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Nice job with the alliteration. I don't think I'd want to be a vampire, or even meet one. Great picture, very creepy. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Jane Johnson

Excellent

Well you made that look easy. Maybe you should try ghost writing, as you seemed to have nailed the meaning in a very few words/syllables. I like the artwork you chose and the words flowed well. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

It's a big complement.but I have never thought about it.I am not so good at narrating stories and framing characters.
Thank you for your generous rating and excellent review:-)

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Vampires are at it again I see wrecking havoc down by the sea ,nice picture for the poem so what are the vampires out roaming this time as if I didn't know!

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013

thanks for your interesting review and excellent rating:)

reply by country ranch writer on 17-Jul-2013

welcome

Comment from muezza56

Excellent

i really enjoyed reading this really well written 5-7-5 poem on the subject of the blood lust of vampires, great imagery with great choice of acc ompanying pic

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

You catch Vampire red with lust for blood
the rave for resurrection understood
Now, there beneath the bat infested moon
The victim who is next will be found soon

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013

That's a wonderful quatrain.i appreciate your comments.
If you wish,go to the prompt i created,you will surely win...hehe..
Thanks for the amazing review:-)