Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 10034 "Nina: A 100 Word Horror"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
87 total reviews
Comment from royowen
This is rather brilliant bro, what a pity you weren't allowed to enter it. Poor Nina she drowned a year yet she rings for messages. Well done, Dean, where have you been? Haven't heard for awhile, I was worried, blessings, Roy.
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This is rather brilliant bro, what a pity you weren't allowed to enter it. Poor Nina she drowned a year yet she rings for messages. Well done, Dean, where have you been? Haven't heard for awhile, I was worried, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from seaglass
Run like the wind! A drippy facet is enough to drive me mad, even without a ghost. This is well done...creepy...even with so few words. Descriptions of sounds help the reader to experience the mystery.
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Run like the wind! A drippy facet is enough to drive me mad, even without a ghost. This is well done...creepy...even with so few words. Descriptions of sounds help the reader to experience the mystery.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from RGstar
Short and sweet, Dean. I prefer to live without the drips, but I guess the company there appreciates more company.
A nice little starter with this hundred word write...could easily get bigger.
Well done.
RGstar
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Short and sweet, Dean. I prefer to live without the drips, but I guess the company there appreciates more company.
A nice little starter with this hundred word write...could easily get bigger.
Well done.
RGstar
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Bill Schott
Dean, I always get a kick out of the production values you include to deepen the experience we have while reading your work. The phone (which I left my computer to answer) and the incessant dripping help create the scene. Great job!
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Dean, I always get a kick out of the production values you include to deepen the experience we have while reading your work. The phone (which I left my computer to answer) and the incessant dripping help create the scene. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from LIJ Red
Maybe Nina just wants her back washed. Too bad about the clash of rules and contests, this seems like a proper entry, a real flashy horror. Excellent post.
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Maybe Nina just wants her back washed. Too bad about the clash of rules and contests, this seems like a proper entry, a real flashy horror. Excellent post.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Domino 2
Shit, Deano - when the sound effects went off, I couldn't decide whether it was my landline phone, mobile phone, front door bell, entryphone system or the community fire alarm! TRUE! OK, I've calmed down now. :-)
Beautiful Nina in the artwork can join ME in the 'bath' anytime, so long as she changes her punk rock haircut (I thought it was at first, LOL) and comes back to life.
EXCELLENT creepy stuff, and I didn't guess the top ending.
Great to see you back, my 'old' buddy.
Best wishes, Ray.
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Shit, Deano - when the sound effects went off, I couldn't decide whether it was my landline phone, mobile phone, front door bell, entryphone system or the community fire alarm! TRUE! OK, I've calmed down now. :-)
Beautiful Nina in the artwork can join ME in the 'bath' anytime, so long as she changes her punk rock haircut (I thought it was at first, LOL) and comes back to life.
EXCELLENT creepy stuff, and I didn't guess the top ending.
Great to see you back, my 'old' buddy.
Best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Move out immediately, I nearly fall from my chair when the phone starts ringing with an unfamiliar tone, when the water starts dripping I realize what is going on. Very clever use of sound.
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Move out immediately, I nearly fall from my chair when the phone starts ringing with an unfamiliar tone, when the water starts dripping I realize what is going on. Very clever use of sound.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from justafan
Had I known that you would be here today, I would have saved a 6 for you sugar plum :)
This deserves on. Stinks about the contest when you put all this into it...grrrr!!!
Like everyone else...Welcome back hon. I wanted to send a search party out after you and MysticAngel7777. She is AWOL as well. I hope she is ok :(
Missy
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Had I known that you would be here today, I would have saved a 6 for you sugar plum :)
This deserves on. Stinks about the contest when you put all this into it...grrrr!!!
Like everyone else...Welcome back hon. I wanted to send a search party out after you and MysticAngel7777. She is AWOL as well. I hope she is ok :(
Missy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Alan K Pease
Where have you been - Paris fantastic? I hope you are well and continue to deliver us fantasy and horror poetry. Sorry you could not post this poem for a contest. Its is scary.
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Where have you been - Paris fantastic? I hope you are well and continue to deliver us fantasy and horror poetry. Sorry you could not post this poem for a contest. Its is scary.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, look who's back in town! You've been missed. Oh, damn, I need to get the phone. Oh, that's you, LOL.
This is a good one, Dean. Your special effects really add so much. Hmm...how does one have nooky with a spirit? At least that's what I'm thinking the bath will lead to. Thank God that dripping finally stopped - it was getting on my nerves, hee hee. Hugs, Lou
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Well, look who's back in town! You've been missed. Oh, damn, I need to get the phone. Oh, that's you, LOL.
This is a good one, Dean. Your special effects really add so much. Hmm...how does one have nooky with a spirit? At least that's what I'm thinking the bath will lead to. Thank God that dripping finally stopped - it was getting on my nerves, hee hee. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015