Lore of the West
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Mustanger"A collection of western stories and poems.
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Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written and very nicely rhymes and it reads very well when it is read aloud. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish for you a wonderful week and a wonderful day. Patricia .
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This is beautifully written and very nicely rhymes and it reads very well when it is read aloud. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish for you a wonderful week and a wonderful day. Patricia .
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the review. I appreciate your comments as always. I hope you have a good rest of the week as well.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, fm wright
I'm assuming that the mustanger is a human who catches horses (mustangs)
That said. You have some nice imagery here. You have a great rhyming scheme.
Here I was wondering why you did not use the same rhyming scheme in this stanza as you did the others
"When he sees into the stallion's eyes,
he discovers much to his surprise,
they contain not a look of dispose,
but sorrow which can't be disguised"
Also what is a look of dispose?
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi, fm wright
I'm assuming that the mustanger is a human who catches horses (mustangs)
That said. You have some nice imagery here. You have a great rhyming scheme.
Here I was wondering why you did not use the same rhyming scheme in this stanza as you did the others
"When he sees into the stallion's eyes,
he discovers much to his surprise,
they contain not a look of dispose,
but sorrow which can't be disguised"
Also what is a look of dispose?
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Yes. I couldn't find it in the dictionary but I took the word and usage from an episode of the old tv series "Lancer." Sorry, it should read dispose. Thank you for catching that. All said I greatly appreciate your review.