Autumn Heart
Eternal Love...4 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow what a lovely sentiment here. I think if the one you grow old with can feel forever young because of you then that is a wonderful compliment and feeling.
Beautifully done Curt.
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
Wow what a lovely sentiment here. I think if the one you grow old with can feel forever young because of you then that is a wonderful compliment and feeling.
Beautifully done Curt.
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2017
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Thank you my friend,
We will see what happens, keep your fingers crossed!
Curt
Comment from rose42benn
Nice. Old hearts bear the weight of the journey, so to feel young yet with your life's partner is a gift. I think not using any punctuation actually allows the words to seem light and captures the speakers feeling of youth.
rose
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
Nice. Old hearts bear the weight of the journey, so to feel young yet with your life's partner is a gift. I think not using any punctuation actually allows the words to seem light and captures the speakers feeling of youth.
rose
Comment Written 21-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from EverInParadise
Well done. Simply put with a promise held in the words. You held to the 575 without syllables. That quite an achievement.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
Well done. Simply put with a promise held in the words. You held to the 575 without syllables. That quite an achievement.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you !
Comment from Analie Shepherd
Well ... I love this! You have said something very important in such a few words. Often these short poems try to say too much and are just confusing. Yours is straight forward and clear. Lovely!
Blessings, Analie
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
Well ... I love this! You have said something very important in such a few words. Often these short poems try to say too much and are just confusing. Yours is straight forward and clear. Lovely!
Blessings, Analie
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you!!!