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Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Very well executed with great humor in the cover photo text. Nice in grammar, mix of wordings and style; short, but still very rich in content! Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Very well executed with great humor in the cover photo text. Nice in grammar, mix of wordings and style; short, but still very rich in content! Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Excellent I hope I dont lose.
Comment from lyenochka
That is a very well done philosophically provocative poem. I like that you say "religion's customer" because those who feel that they must pay to be righteous before God is a customer, not going by faith alone and end up being hypocritical just as the "self made" man. But accepting God's free grace and salvation, makes us free as the title says. That's what I read in the poem.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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That is a very well done philosophically provocative poem. I like that you say "religion's customer" because those who feel that they must pay to be righteous before God is a customer, not going by faith alone and end up being hypocritical just as the "self made" man. But accepting God's free grace and salvation, makes us free as the title says. That's what I read in the poem.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Excellent you got it in one I hope I win again I keep doing it and I just keep using the same poem and some people say you can even vote for yourself . How clever !!!