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a hundred word horror poem41 total reviews
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is a very creative and well written entry for the contest. You have merged horror with wicked humor in that last line. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
This is a very creative and well written entry for the contest. You have merged horror with wicked humor in that last line. Keep writing and stay safe. Bill
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Bill
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Horror writing prompt.
This story of horror is clear and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Horror writing prompt.
This story of horror is clear and well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Sharon
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Best of luck with this fine entry in 100 words. This would be a Horrible situation to be in, glad it wasn't me crawling to a phone. The rhyme was smooth and very descriptive. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
Best of luck with this fine entry in 100 words. This would be a Horrible situation to be in, glad it wasn't me crawling to a phone. The rhyme was smooth and very descriptive. Best wishes.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thanks, Kermit
Comment from Rmocruz
This 100 worder is a very clever combination of humor and gore., quite macabre. The rhyming is solid in this promising writing prompt entry.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
This 100 worder is a very clever combination of humor and gore., quite macabre. The rhyming is solid in this promising writing prompt entry.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Rich
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You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Ulla
Wow, that was horror poem if I've ever read one. It's very well written amidst all the gore. It made me shudder. I liked the ending. It's a great entry for the contest. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
Wow, that was horror poem if I've ever read one. It's very well written amidst all the gore. It made me shudder. I liked the ending. It's a great entry for the contest. Good luck. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Ulla
Comment from Patty Palmer
Now that made me laugh! Funny! The picture with it is neat and then the red text on black background was eerily delightful! Good luck with the contest!
God bless and stay safe!
Patty
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
Now that made me laugh! Funny! The picture with it is neat and then the red text on black background was eerily delightful! Good luck with the contest!
God bless and stay safe!
Patty
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Patty
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Talk about horror! This sent chills up my spine. This should do well in the 100 Word Horror writing contest. Imagine being eaten alive! Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
Talk about horror! This sent chills up my spine. This should do well in the 100 Word Horror writing contest. Imagine being eaten alive! Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, TT
Comment from Minglement
Holy cow this is a hysterical, ghoulish read! Your entry for the 100 Word Horror Poem contest is a gem The rhyming and meter are so skillfully done. I really enjoyed it, especially the punchline. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
Holy cow this is a hysterical, ghoulish read! Your entry for the 100 Word Horror Poem contest is a gem The rhyming and meter are so skillfully done. I really enjoyed it, especially the punchline. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, M
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You are most welcome. Take care, Marcia
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Oooof. I don't necessarily like gore and horror but since it is only 100 words I figured I'd survive. It is a hilarious ending of the "one-liner". There is an interesting juxtaposition here. How you could record such a dramatic episode with rhyme is beyond me. You are very talented.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
Oooof. I don't necessarily like gore and horror but since it is only 100 words I figured I'd survive. It is a hilarious ending of the "one-liner". There is an interesting juxtaposition here. How you could record such a dramatic episode with rhyme is beyond me. You are very talented.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Liz
Comment from BeasPeas
This horror poem is well written, illustrated perfectly for theme. Good rhyming. Best of luck in the contest with this entry, which in my opinion, has an excellent chance of winning. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
This horror poem is well written, illustrated perfectly for theme. Good rhyming. Best of luck in the contest with this entry, which in my opinion, has an excellent chance of winning. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Marilyn