Tiny Tales of Terror
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A good addition to the Tiny Tales of Terror. I'm sure Dean is proud of your work. Some very vengeful activity going on here, and quite a way to die. I'm not sure I quite understood the very end, but I miss things sometimes. Good scary story, though in a sort of, he who lives by the sword, dies by the sword sort of way. Good story,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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A good addition to the Tiny Tales of Terror. I'm sure Dean is proud of your work. Some very vengeful activity going on here, and quite a way to die. I'm not sure I quite understood the very end, but I miss things sometimes. Good scary story, though in a sort of, he who lives by the sword, dies by the sword sort of way. Good story,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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Thank you Rhonda, yes we all see differently and I miss things too. The end is written in such a way as to provoke thought and perhaps allow another chapter to be exorcised from the situation. lol.
Your review is much appreciated :) Mel.
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Ok, that makes sense! Thanks for responding back, Mel.
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My pleasure...