Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 82 "The Road Less Traveled"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
55 total reviews
Comment from madhatter1977
This made me laugh!!! Well done for writing a complete horror story in so few words! The author notes are also hilarious. Nice one, Dean! Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
This made me laugh!!! Well done for writing a complete horror story in so few words! The author notes are also hilarious. Nice one, Dean! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to comment on my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Pete.. I very much appreciate your review as well as your most generous six star rating.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean :}
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Handsome :)
Frightening flash fiction about the kid/scarecrow. Poor Timmy, he has become what he feared most. Your outstanding descriptive writing helps me visualize the horrific tale. Good job Dean!
(((((Gypsy hugs))))))
check out this line-----The thing terrfied the beejeezus outta him. (terrified)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
Hello Handsome :)
Frightening flash fiction about the kid/scarecrow. Poor Timmy, he has become what he feared most. Your outstanding descriptive writing helps me visualize the horrific tale. Good job Dean!
(((((Gypsy hugs))))))
check out this line-----The thing terrfied the beejeezus outta him. (terrified)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Thanks for dropping by to read and review my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Gypsy. Your comments, corrections, and feedback are sincerely appreciated as always.
~Dean ;)
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You're welcome Handsome, it's a pleasure.
~Gypsy
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;)
Comment from TomyKan
An excellent writing of the story of Timmy and the scarecrow. Frighteningly morbid as usual, which I have come to expect of you, Dean, whether poetry or prose.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
An excellent writing of the story of Timmy and the scarecrow. Frighteningly morbid as usual, which I have come to expect of you, Dean, whether poetry or prose.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Thanks for dropping by to read and review my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, TomyKan. Your comments and feedback are sincerely appreciated as always.
~Dean
Comment from doggymad
I'm sorry I can't resist. This is corny ha ha.
Not as scary as some of your stuff but I will certainly watching the scarecrows from now on. It seems that even they are armed and dangerous these days
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
I'm sorry I can't resist. This is corny ha ha.
Not as scary as some of your stuff but I will certainly watching the scarecrows from now on. It seems that even they are armed and dangerous these days
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Thanks for dropping by to read and review my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Freda. Your comments, humor, and feedback are sincerely appreciated, as always.
~Dean :)
Comment from krys123
Dean;
-I simply love this morbidly and horrifyingly short story of Timmy and the scarecrow. After reading your author's notes, first, and even though I knew what was going to happen is still frightened the heck out of me. I guess is you slowly put the reader into a trance with your words.
- I have covet the way you choose your pictures which this one is definitely appropriate, relative and complementary to your work.
- Now Timmy can easily play his human flute by putting his fingers over the holes in his throat and opening his mouth to breathe out. Chuckle!
- Thanks for a very fine and we and for sharing and posting this and may the good Lord be with you always Dean.
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
Dean;
-I simply love this morbidly and horrifyingly short story of Timmy and the scarecrow. After reading your author's notes, first, and even though I knew what was going to happen is still frightened the heck out of me. I guess is you slowly put the reader into a trance with your words.
- I have covet the way you choose your pictures which this one is definitely appropriate, relative and complementary to your work.
- Now Timmy can easily play his human flute by putting his fingers over the holes in his throat and opening his mouth to breathe out. Chuckle!
- Thanks for a very fine and we and for sharing and posting this and may the good Lord be with you always Dean.
Alex
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to read and comment on my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Alex. I very much appreciate your review as well as your most generous six star rating.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean :}
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Dean; you are very masterful in the way you write and the topics that you write of. I have found no one in comparison to you besides Stephen King. You have a kind of flair to your writing that is exceptionally composed.
Also, you are very well welcomed.
Alex
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That's very kind of you to say, Alex my friend. Thanks for that!
~Dean ;)
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You not only deserve it Dean you are it!
Alex
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this story about the scarecrow who took a little boy's life to take his place up on the post so he would scare people off. I enjoyed reading it....
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this story about the scarecrow who took a little boy's life to take his place up on the post so he would scare people off. I enjoyed reading it....
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
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Thank you for your comments, Pam.
~Dean
Comment from wordspinner314
Superb flash fiction! In so few words you showed, intrigued, horrified, and satisfied.
The ending is my favorite: "A smaller crucified body now hangs from the cross, eyeless face watching over the corn--its head draped in bloody burlap."
This is a powerful image that won't soon leave readers.
I found two minor SPAGs for you, if you don't mind:
"Deicate to Fright Fans everywhere . . . " (Do you mean "dedicated"?)
"The thing terrfied the beejeezus outta him." (terrified)
Thank you for another great read!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
Superb flash fiction! In so few words you showed, intrigued, horrified, and satisfied.
The ending is my favorite: "A smaller crucified body now hangs from the cross, eyeless face watching over the corn--its head draped in bloody burlap."
This is a powerful image that won't soon leave readers.
I found two minor SPAGs for you, if you don't mind:
"Deicate to Fright Fans everywhere . . . " (Do you mean "dedicated"?)
"The thing terrfied the beejeezus outta him." (terrified)
Thank you for another great read!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to comment on my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, 'Spinner. I very much appreciate your review.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean :}
Comment from Pantygynt
I never did trust those scarecrows. Turnip heads but this one seems to be on vengeance bent. Someone better tell Bobby that I think he could be next for the pitchfork's prongs.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
I never did trust those scarecrows. Turnip heads but this one seems to be on vengeance bent. Someone better tell Bobby that I think he could be next for the pitchfork's prongs.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to comment on my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Jim. I very much appreciate your review.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean :}
Comment from Liberty Justice
WOW! Man, your poem is suspenseful blood curdling mystifying genius, you! The way you portrayed your victim and used animation to bring that scarecrow to lofe scared and gave me a sense of scary delightful pleasure. You are a Born genius. Are you from this earth? You have a shocking Genius. You should write Hollywood movies! Go for it. Liberty Justice
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
WOW! Man, your poem is suspenseful blood curdling mystifying genius, you! The way you portrayed your victim and used animation to bring that scarecrow to lofe scared and gave me a sense of scary delightful pleasure. You are a Born genius. Are you from this earth? You have a shocking Genius. You should write Hollywood movies! Go for it. Liberty Justice
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to read and comment on my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, LJ. I very much appreciate your review as well as your most generous six star rating.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean :}
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Dean,
A very effective chiller told here.
very short, but not so sweet. Great tone and atmosphere evoked in the piece and suitably horrific. Poor little Timmy.
G
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
Hi Dean,
A very effective chiller told here.
very short, but not so sweet. Great tone and atmosphere evoked in the piece and suitably horrific. Poor little Timmy.
G
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to read and comment on my latest Tiny Tale of Terror, Gareth. I very much appreciate your review as well as your most generous six five rating.
Kudos to you for your third place finish in the reviewing contest as well. Well done...
Take care, my friend.
~Dean :}