Don't wish-Do
Trying another form53 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent job, Kahpot and it's the kind of poem that a person would like to read over and over again, yes? Even after you've memorized it.
Best wishes to you in the contest with this beauty.
A pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Excellent job, Kahpot and it's the kind of poem that a person would like to read over and over again, yes? Even after you've memorized it.
Best wishes to you in the contest with this beauty.
A pleasure to read and review.
Gloria
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review and for the encouragement to try****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Glad you are trying lots of new forms, Kahpot! I do like the message that real thoughts that focus on a course of action will always win over just dreaming about results.
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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Glad you are trying lots of new forms, Kahpot! I do like the message that real thoughts that focus on a course of action will always win over just dreaming about results.
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Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Thank you very much.. PS. your review of my last post was truly helpful and inspiring I am waiting to honor that as reviews like yours are why we newbies try these new adventures, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from meeshu
I did it right this time. this is much like a teaching in the Dao, thoughts evoke emotion which evokes more thought. it is a worthless circle going nowhere until broken up by action (behavior). well said, kahpot............meeshu
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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I did it right this time. this is much like a teaching in the Dao, thoughts evoke emotion which evokes more thought. it is a worthless circle going nowhere until broken up by action (behavior). well said, kahpot............meeshu
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2018
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Hello my friend and thank you so very much for this exceptional review****kahpot