Comment from karenina

Excellent

Voting is begun. I read every entry. Many good efforts. Yours called out to me...
I hope you win, mystery author. I placed my vote in it!

Smile....

Karenina

 Comment Written 15-May-2021

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reply by the author on 15-May-2021

Thank you for your read and encouraging words.

reply by karenina on 15-May-2021

Awesome! Got my vote!--Karenina

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

Sun bows it's blond head. And that is evident in the artwork with this poem. Well coordinated. Well written and contest ready. Nature is a source, a catalogue from which to choose photos and words for poetry. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes

 Comment Written 14-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-May-2021

Thank you for your read and your encouraging comments.

Comment from mobileliz

Excellent

cloud and billow paint a soft image of floating, blushes implies soft innocence, bows implies quiet and respectful, all nice images and the picture is the icing on the cake, nice job

 Comment Written 14-May-2021

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reply by the author on 14-May-2021

Thank you for your read and kind, encouraging words.

reply by mobileliz on 14-May-2021

you're welcome

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This is a good ekphrastic five-seven-five, which summarises the picture perfectly and gives the reader a good impression of its effect on the author. A very calming scene.

 Comment Written 13-May-2021

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reply by the author on 13-May-2021

Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

What a magnificent picture chosen to illustrate your poem.
Good use of colors to show how the evening sky morphs at twilight.
I like your personification of the sun bowing his "blond head."

 Comment Written 13-May-2021

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reply by the author on 13-May-2021

Thank you for your read and feedback. Much appreciated.