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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Congratulations on being RECOGNIZED my friend! Perfect for the 20 syllable contest and best of wishes in the contest! The words flowed perfectly fine together throughout the piece;-)

Thanks for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thank you 🙏 I appreciate your comments
Comment from Patty Palmer
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A great entry for the 20 syllable contest. Your poem gives good advice for us all to pay attention to what we're doing all year long. There are so many opportunities to make life better. Good luck with the contest~
Patty

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thank you for reading and commenting 🙏🙏🎶
Comment from karenina
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I have really been enjoying these twenty syllable creations! How perfect to focus on this new year blossoming! Nice image to enhance your work!

Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables in this expressive, uplifting, forward-focused piece. We must nurture our mental, physical, and spiritual health in 2022.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thanks Janice, enjoy 2022 to its? fullest! 👍👍👍🎶🎶
Comment from Minglement
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What beautiful sentiments to begin the new year. After such a difficult 2921, we need this encouragement to look forward to a better 2022 and have a mindset to make it a better year. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much! let 2022 rock your world In wonderful ways!
reply by Minglement on 19-Jan-2022
    You are most welcome and thank you. 2022 has gotta be better, right ;)
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are a perfect New Year's Wish for all! The words are
uplifting, meaningful and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem.
And yes I agree love, dance, and pray. The artwork is awesome and
compliments these words.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2022
    Thank you Harmony ... May you enjoy the highest and best 2022 will bring onto your life 🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Sugarray77
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I loved this upbeat and encouraging verse, Jim. Well done on picking a topic that is fun and peppy. I intend to take your advice and do all three!! :). Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Hey Mellisa, thank you! See you in class?
Comment from lyenochka
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A great New Year's message, Jim. Yes, let's all "love, dance, and pray!" All these actions help our minds, bodies, souls and spirits so that we can keep living as best as we can. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Thank you!
Comment from royowen
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I think one of things we look for in life, is to squeeze some hedonism, after all, not being perfect, there is the "happiness" realm, which depends on moments, but of course the spiritual joy is "forever l well done Jim, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Thanks Roy!
reply by royowen on 05-Jan-2022
    welcome Jim
Comment from Anne Johnston
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"Harken Thee one and all!
Think mind, body, spirit
this whole year-long ...
love, dance, and pray!"
I like your entry for this contest. This year will be what we make it - in spite of restrictions we have a lot to be thankful for.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
    Thanks Anne,🙏🙏
reply by Anne Johnston on 05-Jan-2022
    You are welcome