Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Resist! Resist!"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from jaded831
Your poem and author's notes eats at the emotions. Putin is truly evil and I only wish evil for him. My religion teaches to forgive those who trespass against us, but Putin crosses the line. No forgiveness for that monster.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Your poem and author's notes eats at the emotions. Putin is truly evil and I only wish evil for him. My religion teaches to forgive those who trespass against us, but Putin crosses the line. No forgiveness for that monster.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Jaded, thank you fr the validation.
Comment from RGstar
Yes, quite. A face on this topic is always going to be harsh, whatever the image, but this brings an orderly look that lends itself to tragedy of normality, as what we know.
I don't think I can add much more, except, good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Yes, quite. A face on this topic is always going to be harsh, whatever the image, but this brings an orderly look that lends itself to tragedy of normality, as what we know.
I don't think I can add much more, except, good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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RG thank you I trust I do hope that your world is settling down and this finds you welL.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent entry for the 25 syllable writing prompt. The use of
grey monochomatic sets a sombre stage, and the photograph you have chosen paints a picture of a determined, industrious people. The line-end rhymes provide an impression of a staccato repeating machine gun.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the 25 syllable writing prompt. The use of
grey monochomatic sets a sombre stage, and the photograph you have chosen paints a picture of a determined, industrious people. The line-end rhymes provide an impression of a staccato repeating machine gun.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Katherine, thank you
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your well metered and rhymed tercet that uses exactly 25 syllables! You also show us the strength of the Ukrainian people against the madman's attack. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Great job with your well metered and rhymed tercet that uses exactly 25 syllables! You also show us the strength of the Ukrainian people against the madman's attack. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you for sharing not only your poem but also the picture, giving the reader a visual of the Ukrainian people.
Excellent rhyme and timely message.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you for sharing not only your poem but also the picture, giving the reader a visual of the Ukrainian people.
Excellent rhyme and timely message.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Janet, thank you twinges of hope that God's plan has a silver lining.
Comment from Leann DS
I like your poem, and the syllable count is perfect. I think most of us share the sentiments. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you have a great week. Hugs and blessings.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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I like your poem, and the syllable count is perfect. I think most of us share the sentiments. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I hope you have a great week. Hugs and blessings.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Leann, thank you!
Comment from victor 66
For the Ukraine to be in such a position, in their own backyard, Russia is truly an invader with the lowest standards of humanity. And I can only hope that they follow your words of courage and strength. The rest of the world cannot and should not stand by and let this atrocity occur. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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For the Ukraine to be in such a position, in their own backyard, Russia is truly an invader with the lowest standards of humanity. And I can only hope that they follow your words of courage and strength. The rest of the world cannot and should not stand by and let this atrocity occur. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Victor, I do agree absolutely, bullies don't stop once they choice a victum ...there will be others for certain.
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We?ve always had bullies but seldom to this degree. All we can do is hope for a reasonable resolution.
Comment from royowen
We were in Ukraine residing on holiday in Sebastopol in 2005, visited Yalta where the war time leaders met, Stalin, Churchill and Roosevelt, beautiful country, then on through Russia, culminating in St. Petersburg, beautifully written entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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We were in Ukraine residing on holiday in Sebastopol in 2005, visited Yalta where the war time leaders met, Stalin, Churchill and Roosevelt, beautiful country, then on through Russia, culminating in St. Petersburg, beautifully written entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you Roy, these Ukrainian history is colorful, the people are equally vibrant and alive with hope and faith.
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They are that
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very nice summary of the battle for Ukraine's freedom and sovereignty. You selected a most appropriate photo to highlight the crisis.
Like your rhyme scheme.
P.S. Consider increasing your text size. IMHO it will enhance your presentation value to FanStory reviewers.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Very nice summary of the battle for Ukraine's freedom and sovereignty. You selected a most appropriate photo to highlight the crisis.
Like your rhyme scheme.
P.S. Consider increasing your text size. IMHO it will enhance your presentation value to FanStory reviewers.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Mark thank you I did nor realize the type face was difficult I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a short piece, but nevertheless extremely poignant. It expresses the hopes of everyone around the world who is appalled by Putin's actions against a peaceful neighbour. I believe the Ukranian people are strong in their resolve, and I also believe Russians will soon turn against the actions of their despot leader.
PK
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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This is a short piece, but nevertheless extremely poignant. It expresses the hopes of everyone around the world who is appalled by Putin's actions against a peaceful neighbour. I believe the Ukranian people are strong in their resolve, and I also believe Russians will soon turn against the actions of their despot leader.
PK
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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PK I do hope you are correct!
