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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this well written club entry with us. Yes, God created all of us in His image. He also sets the example for us to love one another. We are failing at that right now. I will continue to pray for it.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
    Yes, Barbara, I too am on bended knee in prayer!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a beautifully written free verse poem. That we are all children from our God Source -that we are one.
Brother and sister for eons of time gone and yet to be.
Very moving and touching words. Amazing photo.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
    Joanne, thank you for your wonderful validation.
Comment from John Ciarmello
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Wonderfully written my friend. Your free verse flows smoothly where some stop and glitch. I'm a huge fan of free verse and will always read that style before another. You have it down pretty well as there is certainly a technique. Well done.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
    John thank you so much, I believe I find my poetic voice in the free verse poetry style. I truly value your compliment!
Comment from Wendy G
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How wonderful that He has given us the right to become children of God simply by trusting in Jesus. His mercy and love are truly "awe-filled grace", eternal and complete. Thank you for sharing your spiritual thoughts in this thoughtful and thought-provoking piece.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
    Yes, it so wonderful to explore especially now during the Lenten season, thank you for commenting
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You seem very deep into your spiritual side here with this write and your faith is carrying you through life and reassuring you. A very personal free-write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
    Dolly, I have been immersed in Spirit this Lenten season for sure.
Comment from royowen
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I guess I understand where you're coming from, but while we're in human form, we have as much chance of understanding as flying to the moon on a broomstick. God is not a sexual being so Mother does not compute He's not male or female, or these days, whatever, we are all sons anyway. The nature of God must exist in both women and men, because both are made in His image. Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
    Roy as I ponder the topic of God, our Creator, the Alpha and Omega, The OneSource I often see the Yin and Yang of our humanity of masculine/feminine persona which originates from the Godhead - thus realizing that God intended for mankind to have both natures to be balanced in this lifetime.
reply by royowen on 21-Mar-2022
    It?s what He calls himself,. Christ is definitely not a woman, and He is the embodiment of the Godhead.
Comment from jessizero
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I like your seeking awe-filled grace. We are truly all brothers and sisters for all time. Thank you for choosing to share this here. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2022
    Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
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What a wonderful glimpse of Heaven! And we can experience it through the Holy Spirit even while on Earth as we seek His grace and are willing to see and sense His Love that connects us all. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
    Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙏🙏
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. It is well written and you did a nice job with the challenge. The image you chose is eye popping and grabbed me straight away. It complimented your writing perfectly.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
    K.L. Thank you very much! May your forth coming week be filled with warm sun, broad smiles and much Peace...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Truly and per your faith in God, you only feared, but after clarifications, your state of yearning for awe-filled grace of God is no more, you are learned and wise today; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
    Thank you sir!