Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Old Has Been"Musings of an old man - 2022
28 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi JLR, I'm elderly so I get a
kick out of this stellar write.
Sometimes I wish I could
jog and ride horses again,
but my creaky knees won't
let me, lol!!! Have a splendid
evening. All the best. ~
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Hi JLR, I'm elderly so I get a
kick out of this stellar write.
Sometimes I wish I could
jog and ride horses again,
but my creaky knees won't
let me, lol!!! Have a splendid
evening. All the best. ~
Comment Written 04-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2022
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Regina, thank you! I truly understand the losses we endure from our youth; thank you for your six stars - a wonderful gift, so unexpected.
Comment from oliver818
I like this- it's so true, although I'm sure it applies to old women as well. I like the imagery- romping in the glen is such a good way of describing this. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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I like this- it's so true, although I'm sure it applies to old women as well. I like the imagery- romping in the glen is such a good way of describing this. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Oliver, thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is correct in number of words. I like the formatting of the verses. The rhyme works well. Your words are descriptive and filled with imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Your contest entry is correct in number of words. I like the formatting of the verses. The rhyme works well. Your words are descriptive and filled with imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Jan, thank you so much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the art you picked to go with t his piece cleo85 does great work.
The poem holds so much truth about the nature of a man as he gets older. They want to be young again and romp around like they have more years in front of them instead of behind them.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I love the art you picked to go with t his piece cleo85 does great work.
The poem holds so much truth about the nature of a man as he gets older. They want to be young again and romp around like they have more years in front of them instead of behind them.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Mia, thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem. I guess it boils down to whether you want a relationship with someone because of age or if you have other plans like going to college and wanting no relationship until you complete your education.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Like your poem. I guess it boils down to whether you want a relationship with someone because of age or if you have other plans like going to college and wanting no relationship until you complete your education.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Timing is elusive but not as elusive as the right relationship that doesn't get in the way of personal goals and achievement. If it is Right everything else fits hand and glove...
Comment from Terry Broxson
A good entry for the contest, good luck. Since you only had twenty-five words to work with, I think it is very creatively done. I am an old man. I don't think I am grumpy, maybe that is what saves me. Good job. Terry.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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A good entry for the contest, good luck. Since you only had twenty-five words to work with, I think it is very creatively done. I am an old man. I don't think I am grumpy, maybe that is what saves me. Good job. Terry.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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thank you so much Terry?🙏
Comment from Boogienights
Of course they don't...and neither do old women! I should know. I really like this, its a fresh approach to an interesting subject. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Of course they don't...and neither do old women! I should know. I really like this, its a fresh approach to an interesting subject. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're correct. Grumpy old men need love too. LOL I enjoyed reading your writing prompt entry. It has a good message and states it in only a few words. I admire that. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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You're correct. Grumpy old men need love too. LOL I enjoyed reading your writing prompt entry. It has a good message and states it in only a few words. I admire that. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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thank you so much Barbara?🙏
Comment from Raul1
This person shows that it is a had been. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This person shows that it is a had been. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you sir!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Using 25 words to tell a complete story is tricky, you did it well. I enjoyed the humorous tone, this made me smile. The image you chose adds dimension and a lightness that accents your writing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Using 25 words to tell a complete story is tricky, you did it well. I enjoyed the humorous tone, this made me smile. The image you chose adds dimension and a lightness that accents your writing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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K.L. I am smiling back with gratitude on my heart ❤️
