Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Invaluable"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from oliver818
This is a very good entry for the acrostic competition, I enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed these lines-
nesting cardinals nurturing their soon-to-be hatchlings,
visions of the rainbow just after a light spring rain
They are very evocative and powerful. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This is a very good entry for the acrostic competition, I enjoyed reading it. I particularly enjoyed these lines-
nesting cardinals nurturing their soon-to-be hatchlings,
visions of the rainbow just after a light spring rain
They are very evocative and powerful. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Oliver, thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, INVALUABLE, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and lists a number of human endeavors which make our lives worthwhile.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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This acrostic poem, INVALUABLE, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and lists a number of human endeavors which make our lives worthwhile.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022
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Bill thanks for that review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
If you look closely, you will see an angel. A well written poem expressing unconditional love: acts of love is so necessary these days. If you say, "I love you" instead of "I hate you", it will make life better.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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If you look closely, you will see an angel. A well written poem expressing unconditional love: acts of love is so necessary these days. If you say, "I love you" instead of "I hate you", it will make life better.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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I could not agree more fully with your comments, thank you!
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well crafted Acrostic poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your poem gives good examples of what is valuable. Your last line concludes the poem well. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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This is a well crafted Acrostic poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your poem gives good examples of what is valuable. Your last line concludes the poem well. Nice poem.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem made me appreciate life more. The beauty of nature doesn't cost a thing and is just as good as t.v. or a show. You are so right the things you mentioned are better than gold.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Your poem made me appreciate life more. The beauty of nature doesn't cost a thing and is just as good as t.v. or a show. You are so right the things you mentioned are better than gold.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done. Your mind is headed in the right place, line upon line. Good deeds perhaps from your scouting days or being attentive in bible studies or having the blessings of goodly parenting.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Well done. Your mind is headed in the right place, line upon line. Good deeds perhaps from your scouting days or being attentive in bible studies or having the blessings of goodly parenting.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Tom, thank you so much!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have a wonderfully inclusive and moving grasp of what ranks much higher than gold in REAL value. Your acrostic poem is very well-written, creative, and expressive.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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You have a wonderfully inclusive and moving grasp of what ranks much higher than gold in REAL value. Your acrostic poem is very well-written, creative, and expressive.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Janice, thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this post. Service to others is the most selfless mission thst anyone can perform in life, it is a grand mission to do so, the secret is just that, a secret, doing it quietly and selflessly. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This is an excellent entry in this post. Service to others is the most selfless mission thst anyone can perform in life, it is a grand mission to do so, the secret is just that, a secret, doing it quietly and selflessly. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you sir 🙏
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Welcome
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A pleasure
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is a good example of an Acrostic poem. Your writing creates a rhythmic pace which is enjoyable to follow. Your message strikes a tone leaving a lasting message. I hope all of your readers will receive it, given the current state of the world we find ourselves living in.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This is a good example of an Acrostic poem. Your writing creates a rhythmic pace which is enjoyable to follow. Your message strikes a tone leaving a lasting message. I hope all of your readers will receive it, given the current state of the world we find ourselves living in.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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K.L. Thank you very much. 🙏
Comment from June Sargent
Thank you for reminding us in this lovely acrostic poem to just live in the moment - and breathe. There are so many little things we miss or take for granted each day. Negativity can fill our souls if we are not open to seeing the positive side of life. We are the sum total of our experiences - and it's up to us to choose what we become.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reminding us in this lovely acrostic poem to just live in the moment - and breathe. There are so many little things we miss or take for granted each day. Negativity can fill our souls if we are not open to seeing the positive side of life. We are the sum total of our experiences - and it's up to us to choose what we become.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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June, thank you.
