Chasing Gnomes
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13 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Mike, this was a very well written chapter, and I loved all the banter flying about, and the pup brawl was just great. You have some really funny characters in your story. Now what? Will they make it to the exit? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Hi Mike, this was a very well written chapter, and I loved all the banter flying about, and the pup brawl was just great. You have some really funny characters in your story. Now what? Will they make it to the exit? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Ulla :-). We'll soon see where their adventure takes then next!
Mike
Comment from tfawcus
Another most entertaining chapter. I could just see that pub brawl and hear the dull thunks of fists striking faces! It seems as though this merry band is going to lurch from one disaster to the next!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Another most entertaining chapter. I could just see that pub brawl and hear the dull thunks of fists striking faces! It seems as though this merry band is going to lurch from one disaster to the next!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thank you :-). I think with this lot, it's not a question of whether they're headed for disaster so much as where it'll rate on the chaos scale from day to day! So glad you enjoyed it.
Mike
Comment from leather
This story moves along at a good clip, though a little of it is lost on me since I have not been a follower in the past. I did wonder if Olaf was passing out hormones in his drinks. A weird world with funny characters.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This story moves along at a good clip, though a little of it is lost on me since I have not been a follower in the past. I did wonder if Olaf was passing out hormones in his drinks. A weird world with funny characters.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Hehe, thank you :-). There's definitely something anarchic in the air!
Mike
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely done. Good work.
There was a word, or two, that I question the spelling, too many m's, or somesuch, but who am I to question English Earthspeak?
the Bass Brothers. of a prized possession. - extra period
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Nicely done. Good work.
There was a word, or two, that I question the spelling, too many m's, or somesuch, but who am I to question English Earthspeak?
the Bass Brothers. of a prized possession. - extra period
Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks, Wayne :-). I'll have another scan through. It's lots of fun writing this but I can get a bit carried away with Harry's Scottish accent at times!
Mike
Comment from dmt1967
This was another good chapter and it made me smile. I enjoyed reading it and reviewing it and found it very entertaining. Thank you for sharing and have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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This was another good chapter and it made me smile. I enjoyed reading it and reviewing it and found it very entertaining. Thank you for sharing and have a great weekend.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thank you - so glad you enjoyed the read :-)
Mike
Comment from Cindy Warren
Does this lot have a death wish? Why didn't they take themselves out the same way they got in? And chasing after that gem sounds more like suicide to me. Ah, they must enjoy trouble or they'd be more careful not to attract so much attention.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Does this lot have a death wish? Why didn't they take themselves out the same way they got in? And chasing after that gem sounds more like suicide to me. Ah, they must enjoy trouble or they'd be more careful not to attract so much attention.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Hehe, yes I think they might be asking for trouble! Hopefully, it won't be more than they can handle ...
Mike
Comment from lyenochka
Well, it seems the Rozlyn is a strong leader and may be able to control this crew of very different characters. I found it hard to follow because of the many characters. But I did like the linguistic comments about the dwarves having a hundred different words for gold.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Well, it seems the Rozlyn is a strong leader and may be able to control this crew of very different characters. I found it hard to follow because of the many characters. But I did like the linguistic comments about the dwarves having a hundred different words for gold.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2022
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Thank you :-). I'll do my best to keep them clear and distinct going forward. I'm really glad you liked it!
Mike
Comment from royowen
I can see the company is getting back together, living in what was my habitat once before, I recognise the imagery you paint here Mike. Rozlyn and her bunch of worthies are off on another jaunt with treasure in mind, to be able to sustain their liberal lifestyle, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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I can see the company is getting back together, living in what was my habitat once before, I recognise the imagery you paint here Mike. Rozlyn and her bunch of worthies are off on another jaunt with treasure in mind, to be able to sustain their liberal lifestyle, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Roy. Glad you're enjoying the ride :-)
Mike
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Well done
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very fun story going a mile a minute with the wisecracks and brawls and LJ saying things he immediately regrets as he has such a good view. I do enjoy your stories and they go so fast I don't know if you have any typos.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Very fun story going a mile a minute with the wisecracks and brawls and LJ saying things he immediately regrets as he has such a good view. I do enjoy your stories and they go so fast I don't know if you have any typos.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you, Carol :-). I always appreciate catches, but I also love when someone just enjoyed the story and stopped looking. I'm so glad you liked it.
Mike
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cool another fun chapter and pretty dynamic just on my liking:) The lady it's Menace and she is crushing it:) her dry humor it's one that makes her a very interesting character. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Cool another fun chapter and pretty dynamic just on my liking:) The lady it's Menace and she is crushing it:) her dry humor it's one that makes her a very interesting character. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much, Iza :-). I'm so glad you're enjoying it - Rozlyn is a wry one, for sure. I wonder if she's hiding something...
Mike
