Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Reply to Blessed Hands of Sleep"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Dawn Munro
I love your choice of a poem and your own answer to it -- in fact, I would rate this as it deserves if only I just one more six available. I just assigned my last one. But I would be very surprised if this is not the winner of this contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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I love your choice of a poem and your own answer to it -- in fact, I would rate this as it deserves if only I just one more six available. I just assigned my last one. But I would be very surprised if this is not the winner of this contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your kind validation and good wishes.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Wendy G
I actually think I preferred your response, perhaps because it seemed a bit more realistic and relatable, and more mature in its expression. Very well done. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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I actually think I preferred your response, perhaps because it seemed a bit more realistic and relatable, and more mature in its expression. Very well done. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Wendy, thank you for the good wishes and validation.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
this was a good entry for the contest. I would have done it a bit different weaving my comments in and out after each stanza but this works fine whatever works for you.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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this was a good entry for the contest. I would have done it a bit different weaving my comments in and out after each stanza but this works fine whatever works for you.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Jake thanks for the support with my approach for this contest.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your answer was well thought out and nicely written. It is an excellent reply to the poetry you chose to write about. I enjoyed reading this writing and look forward to your next one. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Your answer was well thought out and nicely written. It is an excellent reply to the poetry you chose to write about. I enjoyed reading this writing and look forward to your next one. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much🙏🙏
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful response to Anna Hempstead Branch's poem. I like how you added to it with rebirth, and you concluded with the same idea, adding blameless and less forlorn.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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This is a beautiful response to Anna Hempstead Branch's poem. I like how you added to it with rebirth, and you concluded with the same idea, adding blameless and less forlorn.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Verna, thank for this validation and six-stars.
Comment from lyenochka
I really like how you achieved the same thing as the original poem but with more modern and relatable speech. I liked yours much better and it conveys the healing blessedness of sleep. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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I really like how you achieved the same thing as the original poem but with more modern and relatable speech. I liked yours much better and it conveys the healing blessedness of sleep. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Thank you for this validation!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the poem by Anna Hempstead and your version is expressive and vibrant and I enjoyed your entry for the contest, good luck, this is very challenging, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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I loved the poem by Anna Hempstead and your version is expressive and vibrant and I enjoyed your entry for the contest, good luck, this is very challenging, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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Smiling back with a big thanks!
Comment from royowen
You scribed an excellent response to you favourite poem, of course you would wouldn't you Jim. I'm amazed at the quality of poetry I've read as a response to these poet's responses, and this us no exception Jim, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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You scribed an excellent response to you favourite poem, of course you would wouldn't you Jim. I'm amazed at the quality of poetry I've read as a response to these poet's responses, and this us no exception Jim, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2022
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I am very grateful! Thank you.
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Bless you
