Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

As is to be expected, another good one Roy. This one flows along so smoothly with an even tempo and a gentle bounce. The words are spot on and nothing but truth. All glory to God!

Very nice

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022

Thanks Gary, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Beautifully written and heartfelt, a true testimony of how much God means in your life. I'm truly glad for you, thanks so much for this lovely poem. :)

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022

Thanks for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A clear and strong testimony to the work of God in your life, turning you around, and giving you a sense of value, worth, and meaning. No-one can argue with a personal testimony. Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022

Thanks Wendy, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from forestport12

Excellent

I like how you can make a perfect rhyme seem unforced and so perfectly natural to what you are trying to say, like Dust and Rust. Dark and Stark. But I also liked how you applied the Earth with Girth. Timing and how it all comes together.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022

Thanks for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this verse exploring what your faith means to you and the journey you have taken.
I hope all of your readers receive the powerful message you have sent!
Your phraseology is excellent and the use of metaphors is effective at painting a picture for the reader to interpret.
The rhymes are smooth as silk.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022

Thanks for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Roy, I think you know where I stand on this. But I'm glad you found what made you a happy person. That is the most important. You have again penned a beautiful poem. Such a joy to read. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022

Thanks Ulla for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Amen! Thank you for sharing the gospel in your well rhymed iambic heptameter! Yes, life on earth is hard and hopeless. It's only in Christ that we have real life and truth and grace!

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022

Thanks Helen for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from aryr

Excellent

I really loved the picture of the castle in the sky, above the clouds, Roy. Your words were well written because they showed what was in our past and what our future holds. Salvation through Christ is our only way. Blessings.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022

Thanks Alie, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by aryr on 13-Aug-2022

Most welcome, Roy. Blessings.

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Roy,

This is another brilliant inspirational write. Each poem you post has a positive message and an important reoccurring theme. Excellent verse choice : Matthew 10:38-40

God bless,

Eugene

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022

Thanks Eugene, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

I thought this was impeccably written, Roy, mixing life's journey and crucial turns with commentary and observation. I guess there's more than one way to lose a life - sometimes, it can be a positive thing.

Mike

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022

Thanks Mike, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy