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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from Spitfire
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LOL When my daughter decided to finally wed her live-in boyfriend, I was delighted his mother worked with her to plan it. I wasn't happy about her choice of husband but I've grown to like him. But she did want me to help her find a dress and that satisfied me.

I like your attitude about their need to be married by a Justice of the Peace. If you had spent a lot of time planning a big show, you might been upset.

I can't wait to hear what happens next. Good cliffhanger.


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    Thank you for the great review. You're right. If I'd spent more time I might have not have thought it was so funny when I found out she was already married. She couldn't saved a lot of money if she done it that way to begin with. LOL
    Beth
Comment from lyenochka
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I always feel so awful for you when I read about how your kids treated you! But I guess when we were young, we might have been more self absorbed.
I was confused about "didn't want us upset about not being at their actual marriage" because I am pretty sure that Connie and Charlie did attend their wedding.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    Thank you Helen. I meant Connie and Charlie legitimate wedding was in the courthouse with no family there to witness it. We would of course, be at the ceremony, but the two of them were already officially married. If you think others will be confused, maybe I should word it differently.
reply by lyenochka on 14-Aug-2022
    Oh! I get it now. Maybe it was just me. I'd change it only if someone else was confused. Don't they need a witness even for those courthouse marriages?
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    They might have taken one of Charlie's or Connie's friends. All they told me was they were cracking up laughing all though the ceremony. It didn't sound like a serious start to a marriage.
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These are marvellous memories Beth, and even though you've got strong minded kids, they've grown up in a loving household, and with a Christian upbringing they always find their way in the end. This is beautifully written dear girl, and thank you for being transparent. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : Moved her things from Carol('s) apartment.

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much Roy. I really appreciate the review and nice comments.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 15-Aug-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Teri7
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This is very interesting and well written. It is so good that you can remember all these details. I can hardly remember many of mine at all. I am enjoying reading this. Thank you for telling us about all the people and what they did as far as work, etc. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much Teri. I really appreciate the great review and the six stars.
    Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I can't wait to see what happens next. It sounds as if it's not at all good. Thank you for sharing. No family is perfect. They all have issues.

She couldn't understand why I was allowing my dad cause me to put my life on hold. (The words in this sentence are out of order and it doesn't read right.)

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2022


reply by the author on 15-Aug-2022
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I meant to say "to cause me to put my life on hold." I reworked it.
    Beth