Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Golden needle and silver thread"Musings of an old man - 2022
28 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is brilliant, creative, and enchanting.
It is an outstanding poem of faith, and I have no doubt it will do well in the contest.
Best wishes and good luck,
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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This is brilliant, creative, and enchanting.
It is an outstanding poem of faith, and I have no doubt it will do well in the contest.
Best wishes and good luck,
Mary
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Thank you -- Mary! I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from nomi338
The Golden Needle and Silver Thread is the love and care we show, when we display unselfish love and concern for the welfare of our fellow man. When we pray for his soul and forgiveness not just for our sins, but his as well. Unselfish love, care and concern will fix much of what is wrong in our world today. Very well written and conceived poem.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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The Golden Needle and Silver Thread is the love and care we show, when we display unselfish love and concern for the welfare of our fellow man. When we pray for his soul and forgiveness not just for our sins, but his as well. Unselfish love, care and concern will fix much of what is wrong in our world today. Very well written and conceived poem.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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My sincere thank you, Nomi
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this verse very much as it explores your faith.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative. You have a wonderful imagination.
The repeated refrain makes this read almost as a lyrical verse, with a soothing tempo.
I appreciate the presentation as it mirrors the sentiment.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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I enjoyed this verse very much as it explores your faith.
You have done a great job with the prompt, very creative. You have a wonderful imagination.
The repeated refrain makes this read almost as a lyrical verse, with a soothing tempo.
I appreciate the presentation as it mirrors the sentiment.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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K.L. Thank you very much!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
An interesting poem. The images are clear. The metaphor is carried out throughout the poem. The language is warm and conversational. The flow is good. The repeated refrain works well to bind the whole together.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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An interesting poem. The images are clear. The metaphor is carried out throughout the poem. The language is warm and conversational. The flow is good. The repeated refrain works well to bind the whole together.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Faith can be referred to as something made of gold as those who have it are blessed, I enjoyed your inventive and well chosen words, a fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Faith can be referred to as something made of gold as those who have it are blessed, I enjoyed your inventive and well chosen words, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Michaela Moore
Oh what a lovely way to describe how we Christians help others and serve others and also how God helps and serves us. How often he has fixed my tatters and holes and then showed me to help others. I love the repitition in your poem too. It rocks my soul into comfort.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Oh what a lovely way to describe how we Christians help others and serve others and also how God helps and serves us. How often he has fixed my tatters and holes and then showed me to help others. I love the repitition in your poem too. It rocks my soul into comfort.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Michaela, I am pleased this is so.
Comment from SLMorrical
This is a wonderful entry for the contest. I enjoyed reading this very much. This poem touched my heart and soul. I love the metaphors you used. I especially like the phrase the fabric of man's soul's has been torn. This phrase defiantly a metaphor for the times. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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This is a wonderful entry for the contest. I enjoyed reading this very much. This poem touched my heart and soul. I love the metaphors you used. I especially like the phrase the fabric of man's soul's has been torn. This phrase defiantly a metaphor for the times. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from GWHARGIS
You know what struck me about this poem? It was all laid on God or his responsibility to fix things. You were responsible for the "sewing and binding". God gives us the tools and it's up to us to use them. Beautiful poem of faith. Gretchen
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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You know what struck me about this poem? It was all laid on God or his responsibility to fix things. You were responsible for the "sewing and binding". God gives us the tools and it's up to us to use them. Beautiful poem of faith. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you Gretchen.
Comment from GeraldShuler
I see this wonderful poem as an allagory of what God really has given us. He gave us His love to share with the world. If only more Christians would take up the needle and thread of God's love then I believe the hurts of life would certainly mend. Your poem is beautiful and inspiring. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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I see this wonderful poem as an allagory of what God really has given us. He gave us His love to share with the world. If only more Christians would take up the needle and thread of God's love then I believe the hurts of life would certainly mend. Your poem is beautiful and inspiring. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Gerald, thank you! I am in complete agreement.
Comment from lyenochka
God does equip us to serve Him by helping the hurting among humankind. I liked the sewing metaphor for the helping to heal human souls with love, especially "shaping and softening every stitch called for " Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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God does equip us to serve Him by helping the hurting among humankind. I liked the sewing metaphor for the helping to heal human souls with love, especially "shaping and softening every stitch called for " Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Lyenochka, my sincere thank you for y wonderful thoughts.
