Life's Lasting Memories
Sonnet type- aabb52 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. I can tell that you are ready to meet her in heaven. But stay around a little longer with your daughter and write more poems like this. We all enjoy your contribution to Fanstory.
Well done.
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Yes. I can tell that you are ready to meet her in heaven. But stay around a little longer with your daughter and write more poems like this. We all enjoy your contribution to Fanstory.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
Comment from Kaiku
Goodness, I wish sure heart strength during this time. Please look at 2nd stanza, first line I believe. It might be my phone but it looks like 'str' should be something more. I have read other works by you and enjoy your style. Thank you.
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Goodness, I wish sure heart strength during this time. Please look at 2nd stanza, first line I believe. It might be my phone but it looks like 'str' should be something more. I have read other works by you and enjoy your style. Thank you.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
Comment from Ulla
This is such a lovely tribute to your late wife who you miss, but hold very fond memories of.
I'm not quite sure what 'str' stands for..
As usual I enjoyed the read. Ulla:)))
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This is such a lovely tribute to your late wife who you miss, but hold very fond memories of.
I'm not quite sure what 'str' stands for..
As usual I enjoyed the read. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
Comment from JoannaN
This is a poem that is strong and sincere. Sometimes people leave us, but there are still memories that remain with us.
PS: One little thing: "make str my thing" - please check this line.
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This is a poem that is strong and sincere. Sometimes people leave us, but there are still memories that remain with us.
PS: One little thing: "make str my thing" - please check this line.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
Comment from Douglas Goff
I'm not sure if this made me sad or happy. I think the mellow color matched the tone well.
Wasn't sure what the 'str' in this stanza meant? :
I must stay strong, make str my thing,
Very emotional. Nice.
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I'm not sure if this made me sad or happy. I think the mellow color matched the tone well.
Wasn't sure what the 'str' in this stanza meant? :
I must stay strong, make str my thing,
Very emotional. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. This is such a bittersweet piece. Thank goodness you have those wonderful memories. I do hope they ease the loss. This was tender and beautifully written. I'm very glad I happened upon it. Gretchen
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Awe. This is such a bittersweet piece. Thank goodness you have those wonderful memories. I do hope they ease the loss. This was tender and beautifully written. I'm very glad I happened upon it. Gretchen
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have written a lovely tribute to your departed wife. Have you been alone for some time, or has she passed away recently? My heart goes out to you. My husband passed away in 2018, and I miss him dearly. Nice writing.
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You have written a lovely tribute to your departed wife. Have you been alone for some time, or has she passed away recently? My heart goes out to you. My husband passed away in 2018, and I miss him dearly. Nice writing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
JB1, This is beautiful, and I hope as you write it brings you closer to your wife. It breaks my heart each time I read one of these special pieces about her. You are blessed with the perfect talent for your poetry, and I'm sure she is reading right along as you're writing. Best, JohnC
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JB1, This is beautiful, and I hope as you write it brings you closer to your wife. It breaks my heart each time I read one of these special pieces about her. You are blessed with the perfect talent for your poetry, and I'm sure she is reading right along as you're writing. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Jay, your poem is most heartfelt, and the love for your dear departed wife shines through in your writing. Of special note:
Those memories are all I know.
They give me help and make me grow.
(Hold onto your memories. No One can take your memories from you.)
Good rhyming. A poem from the heart. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
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Hello Jay, your poem is most heartfelt, and the love for your dear departed wife shines through in your writing. Of special note:
Those memories are all I know.
They give me help and make me grow.
(Hold onto your memories. No One can take your memories from you.)
Good rhyming. A poem from the heart. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I always love to read your amazing poetry dedicated to your lost love. Very well put together. A great flow and rhyme scheme. Your wife sounds like she was something real special and clearly shows how much you loved her. Beautiful writing.
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I always love to read your amazing poetry dedicated to your lost love. Very well put together. A great flow and rhyme scheme. Your wife sounds like she was something real special and clearly shows how much you loved her. Beautiful writing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2022
