Red Skeletons
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Comment from Ricky1024
This Temptation Contest Entry Rich in theme and Imagery also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Her sweet taste. Thr curves of her face, can't seem to get enough?
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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This Temptation Contest Entry Rich in theme and Imagery also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Her sweet taste. Thr curves of her face, can't seem to get enough?
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
Yes, this is the darker side of things. I suppose for killers and psychopaths, this would be how temptation works on their minds.
A well constructed free verse, and a complete shortened tale.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Yes, this is the darker side of things. I suppose for killers and psychopaths, this would be how temptation works on their minds.
A well constructed free verse, and a complete shortened tale.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2023
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Thank you