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The Final Gabriel Hope Journey

5 total reviews 
Comment from BethShelby
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I'm enjoying the story. It seem that Prisha will be very helpful. I 'm sure they have a plan worked out in order to be able to rescue the others. I'm anxious to find out what happens next.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words! The battle comes next.

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Prisha sounds like a woman who is helping herself and other women, so they come clean and free. I realize that her father sold her for a slave. The father said she was a beast and also a pig. Who would do that to a family member. Very tragic.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    Hi, Rosemary. Thank you for your kind words! Hope comes next.

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from prettybluebirds
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This is the first I have read of this story. It is skillfully executed, and the dialogue is superb. Your descriptions take the reader into the story, and I can visualize every scene. Nice work.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from Ric Myworld
Exceptional
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Well, Mike, things are moving right along and I can hardly wait for your crew, or God's crew, to get busy and clean that mess up and free all the girls. LOL. Okay, so I'm jumping the gun a little. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    Hi, Ric. Big, boom, bang, comes next. Thank you for your kind words and the shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
Comment from royowen
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The team have rescued Prisha from the clutches of the evil ones, who enslave their captives and do evil things with them, while Satan and His evil angels are manipulative, Heaven's warriors are endeavouring to set people free. Beautifully written Mike, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
    Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!

    Have a great day, and God bless.
    mike
reply by royowen on 30-Jan-2023
    Most welcome