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Of Stolen Pride

A sense of identity that was taken

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Comment from Wendyanne
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I found this to be a very sad and poignant piece of writing. Despite being only six words you have said so much and I found it very thought-provoking. It was disgusting to do what they did! Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023

Comment from Navada
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The internal rhyme and the fabulous choice of image really enhance your storytelling here. How challenging when a lack of cultural awareness has unintended negative consequences. It happens all around the world and has happened throughout history. Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2023