Comment from Allison78

Excellent

I think this is a great poem you have written here! It is short but very profound, powerful and thought provoking. I think we all feel like this from time to time. Great job!

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

thank you so much... maybe this thought blown my mind. for i was never expecting that i can create this kind of poem. i have been a victim of fear without even knowing wether it results to bad or good.. thank you so much . hope i'll win.

Comment from Doubledare

Good

Steven, when I first read this I did not get it. So, I read it again and then a third time. This sounds like schizophrenia. Is this correct? Or could this be someone battling depression? Is it a person who doesn't know how to approach a sensitive subject. This is an interesting haiku.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

yah, a person who doesnt know how to overcome shame or fear. a person who is always afraid of possibilities in which they really expect what might happen if they intend or try to do it... by the way thank you so much for the appreciation.

Comment from Modee

Excellent

Ok...ya got the 5-7-5 down....and the words make me think you are screaming inside your head. Could use a little color and a picture. other than that, very nice.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012

thank you so much for your appreciation... it is my first time of joining this site. its great... thanks a lot...